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Dec 04, 2008 22:19

Title: Too far in
Author: Las
Pairing: Elias/Jonny, Jonny/Greg
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Not real, make no money.
Summary: People wondered what Elias was doing with the collection of four odd men that formed Kill Hannah. He seemed too normal, too sane to fit in with the bunch of them. Elias himself liked to think of it that way too. He observed, ( Read more... )

too far in, fiction, kill hannah rps

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phaelas December 5 2008, 09:56:09 UTC
Oh I'm glad to hear it works well! It seemed more of a total info dump to me when I reread the whole thing. :P (cause to be quite honest, it was written as info dump, as only the last scene was part of the original plotbunny...)

Oh, I do think it's too late for dear 'lias. :P

<33

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unifiedxdivide December 5 2008, 14:41:54 UTC
Wow, that was such a powerful and very, very realistic-feeling. When Jonny said he needed to feel something real I just shivered.

I think that this is so not-far from a possible reality that it was just that much more vivid. Please keep writing in this fandom kthx.

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phaelas December 5 2008, 17:58:45 UTC
I just wanted to write something different. I'm glad to hear it has such an effect.

I don't seem to be going anywhere. :) <3

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x_carnivale_x December 6 2008, 08:22:43 UTC
This was very intense for me, just reading it. It really was. Jonny talking to Elias about how he wasn't there with them yet, I felt twists in my stomach.

Excellent. I really love it. It's so. realistically sad.

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phaelas December 6 2008, 14:32:21 UTC
Thank you very much. I wasn't sure whether this fic was going to be liked, so it means a lot!

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phaelas December 8 2008, 09:06:05 UTC
Thanks!!

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killhannahx3 January 6 2009, 19:03:18 UTC
WOW
god.
why do I keep surprising myself at how well you write?
THis was....
exceptional! I love Elias' little thoughts throughout the whole thing and DAMN, this could very well be happening to the band at this very minute, unfortunately.
I really worry about them, sometimes, the band. It seems like the fact that they concentrate too much on the music, the touring, the fans, and the merch that eventually, they'll forget about themselves and by the time they realize it, they'll be too far gone.

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phaelas January 7 2009, 07:23:18 UTC
I know, I do too. I'm so happy that Jonny took that time off and looks better now, even if I had to miss him the past tour. I hope they're all taking care of themselves now, but knowing Mat (And reading his blog) I know there's little chance of that in his case. *shakes head at him*

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killhannahx3 January 8 2009, 01:47:01 UTC
Did they really say that Jon took off that European tour because of his weight? Because, everyone keeps hinting at it...

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phaelas January 8 2009, 09:20:59 UTC
Last version I heard, Jess moved to New York and Jonny moved in with her. I've heard nothing to counter this - since he IS living in New York now, lol.

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