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[phaelas]

Title: The suite (chapter 5/11)
Author: Las
Pairings: Jonne/Kristian, Jonne/?
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jonne pays a lonely visit to a hotel in a fairytale setting - Kristian the bored hotel employee finds himself intruiged.
Warnings: Very much AU, explicit het, explicit slash, voyeurism.... and cuteness. :P
Betas: inside_the_veil. Kiitos love! <3

Comments

[phaelas]

Wheeee yes! He's not really all that innocent and pretty! Though... okay maybe he IS pretty. :P

<3 ;D

[jonne_bunny]

Now Kris comes in and gets some ass? *pouts*

[phaelas]

*rolls eyes*

[theo_superstar]

Quick question... would it not be really hard to roll on a condom underwater? I mean.. it would fill up with water, right? =S Just some weird thing I thought of while reading this..
Awesome fic though :D *adores Kristian*

[phaelas]

I have no clue, and I actually think that it's not even allowed to use condoms under water (or maybe special ones?)... but who cares. :D

Thanks! *g*

[jayce47]

When would it reach his lover’s mind that he didn’t really need entertainment like this?

I found this bit rather sad and this bit,

There is something totally dissatisfying about having sex with someone not enjoying it.

But oh so well written and is his lover male or female ;)

[phaelas]

Oh, it wasn't meant as sad, actually - neither quotes. He just misses his lover terribly but it's not like he's generally neglected or something. It's more that his lover is worried about him and his well-being.

You can take two guesses. I'll remind you that Antti calls him 'Mr Musician'... :P

[lindtti]

Hmmm... That was different and a litlle unexpesced, but I still love the story and I can't wait for more.

I really enjoyed the way you presented Jonne. Yessss... *loves*

[phaelas]

There's gonna be quite some 'different' stuff in this story. What's the point in writing it otherwise? :D My point of view, anyway.

Thankies! :D