chapter seventeen

[pforte]

For your interest, this is my favourite chapter of the story. I emoted all over the place while writing it and I am just very happy how it turned out.

Story: Revelation
Chapter title: sacrifices
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter. The Harry Potter universe was created by JK Rowling and therefore belongs to her and her various

Comments

[tonks_2005]

Yayness!

[pforte]

Hehe! *huggles*

[tonks_2005]

This story is sooo good! It should be in teh kennel!

[eumelkeks]

Nah, it shouldn't. a) too long, b) the first two chapters are crappy c) I'm not as goog as folks in there.

[myprecioussssss]

Just spent that past who-knows-how-many hours reading this story and I love it to death. :D I rarely come out of lurking to comment on things (I lurk ALL THE TIME - this is even my lurking accout), so you know it's good.

Aww.. I usually avoid angsty stories because they make me sad like this, but once I start reading them I can never stop. I always end up hating Peter when I read fics but I actually want to KILL him this time. And I mean that as a compliment to you. :)

Ugh, I'll stop talking now. Sorry, I'm a certified rambler.

[pforte]

Awww, thanks a lot!

Like everyone else, I hate Peter but I tried to make him nice and partly funny. If he had been a whiny lying bastard from the beginning Sirius, James and Remus would obviously not have been friends with him.

But yay for killing Peter! ;)

[deichrodler]

I'm still so lazy in reading fanfic, although I - really - liked the first chapters I read of your first story a lot.

*hides in shame
*but tries to improve online reading habits

[pforte]

Hehe, nobody forces you to read fanfiction. I avoided reading it for years. But then...well, you know my obsession. ;)

But thanks for giving my baby a try!

[deichrodler]

I really like it. Read some chapters today morning at work (until teh boss came...lol).
Maybe I will read more now in teh office...:D
There are just little things that come critical in my mind (really just details - and I wouldn't even be able to write a story, so I'm maybe wrong with them) - from all I know I'm impressed of your imagination and possibilities to write! Really!

[pforte]

Oh, I tried to be close to canon but I fucked some things up. I was totally convinced that Regulus died a year later than he actually did. Stupid me, but so far nobody complained. *rotfl*

Oh, I just revealed my dirty little secret.

Nah, honestly, tell me what's bad or weird in your opinion. I can explain or correct it.

[koreni_san]

so so so so so soooooo good...!!!!
longest fic I've ever read too... Now,about Pete... You're actually the first one who presents him as a Marauder and not some kind of unworthy parasite...hurray for that...!!! ^.^
*awaits for the next one in agony*

[pforte]

Thanks! I'm glad you like my Peter and the story despite (or because of?) its length.

[moodymuse19]

I've been following this for days now, maybe weeks, and I can truly say I'm nearly dead. Come the next chapters I'm going to cry so much. You're killing me here!
But that only means this is truly an amazing fic. Keep it up, it's great!

[pforte]

Thanks a lot! I like making people cry. Mwahahaha! ;)

[moodymuse19]

You're evil.
But we seem to still love you anyway. ;)

[pforte]

It's part of my charm. ;)