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In The Dead of The Night - chapter five

May 21, 2009 18:30

Story: In The Dead of The Night
Chapter title: Dire straights
Fandom: Southern Vampire Novels
Pairing: Sookie/Eric
Rating: NC-17 (gratuitous graveyard sex)
Summary: There is always something up in the supernatural world. Being under attack, the vampires at Fangtasia are no happy campers and Sookie has more than one reason to be hesitant about ( Read more... )

southern vampire novels, sookie/eric

Comments 37

lupislune May 21 2009, 16:54:32 UTC

This was a good read :)

pforte May 21 2009, 20:55:26 UTC

Thank you!

mexicantt May 21 2009, 20:46:18 UTC

(Yes, the blood bond comes in handy when it comes to dodging responsibility, I am aware of that.)

*snerk* Commentary on the latest book, perhaps?

I don’t know why vampires always seem to think that they’d be able to extract my thoughts and feelings by staring at me long and hard but there it is.

Oooh, Twilight reference? :rotfl:

But I'm glad to see the "tbc" because that makes me happy.

You know I love this fic. And you. *muah*

eumelkeks May 21 2009, 20:55:00 UTC

Oh, it's so good to see you, bb! *hugs* I shouldn't even be here but I sneaked upstairs to use my mum's computer. *iz sneaky*

I hope the graveyard sex scene wasn't awkward. It's really hard to keep the tone of the series and make it remotely hot. *lol* It was agonising to write.

Oooh, Twilight reference? :rotfl:

LOL, no. Eric does that a lot. Have you never noticed? She always describes his eyes as 'slits of blue' staring at her.

mexicantt May 21 2009, 20:59:20 UTC

I know, I know, but I couldn't resist! At least it makes sense for Eric to do that because of the blood bond - he really can feel her feelings if he concentrates and can probably get a gauge for her thoughts that way and by looking in her eyes. Windows to the soul and all that.

The graveyard sex scene was done well - as well as sex with a vampire in a graveyard can go. ;) Infinitely better than the Sookie/Bill moment in the show. Which was always awkward to me and borderline rape.

I'm trying to be around at least enough to read entries. It's hard though.

eumelkeks May 21 2009, 21:09:26 UTC

Well, you have an excellent excuse. ;)

The True Blood graveyard scene must have been one of the most appalling sex scenes I have ever seen. Although most of the other scenes that fall into that category are also from the show. True Blood is just NOT SEXY. At all.

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alethialia May 21 2009, 22:05:48 UTC

Yayyyy! Also, you did hot graveyard sex! Ya know, as opposed to the almost-rape of the books. And the unsexy times of the show. You rocketh! Also, Eric laid out his shirt first. Yes, that! Right there. Perfect.

(Though nothing floppy, either. Sometimes I am rather vindictive and showing Bill what he missed was a petty little pleasure I would undoubtedly pay for in my afterlife.)

::snorts:: Your Sookie-voice, 'tis dead-on.

“Want to know what’s on the next page?” Eric quirked an eyebrow.

AHAHAHA. Don't we all. I adore how you incorporate Eric's humor.

while he penetrated me with his fangs and, um, you know, until he fell over the edge, too.

Hee! Love her voice. Lovelovelove.

Vampires. Never in need of Viagra.

Damn right.

“Then you’re only burdening yourself with unnecessary guilt, which isn’t helpful.”

I turned and glared at Eric, who continued to look as unapologetic as can be.

AHAHAHAHA! Omg, I LOVE Eric-the-pragmatist.

Eric gave her a long, scrutinizing look. “I’d be obliged to you.” I knew then that he understood ( ... )

eumelkeks May 22 2009, 18:03:52 UTC

*flails* COMMENT! LONG! ♥

Sookie understands because of telepathy - because she knows Amelia and also because she can read her mind. But Eric - Eric understands because he's JUST THAT ADEPT at strategy.

I think we don't see him being competent often enough.I mean, there must be a reason he's sheriff of Area Five and the only sheriff who survived the takeover.

I'M SOOOOOO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!

alethialia May 22 2009, 20:28:15 UTC

Competence = hot like fire! I approve.

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rascalthemutant May 22 2009, 01:20:18 UTC

(another calendar word I didn’t actually think of while having sex with Eric)

Nice! A different take on it.

you know she and I have a mental connection because of her being my teacher and all

I did not know this. Interesting.

I love your story! It's so original and engaging. Your updates are always a special treat. :)

pforte May 22 2009, 18:05:00 UTC

Oh hai! Thanks for reading and commenting!

I did not know this. Interesting.

I made that up. *lol*

susanbones111 May 22 2009, 02:57:30 UTC

I loved the description of Eric's body. I can tell you like to describe men better than women.

I'm glad there wasn't any mud involved.

Did Sam smell the sex on her?

eumelkeks May 22 2009, 18:07:07 UTC

I loved the description of Eric's body. I can tell you like to describe men better than women.

What can I say? I'm straight. ;) But I would usually not gush about a male character's appearance. It's what Sookie does, however. A lot. And ugh, mud. Why would anyone think that this was even remotely sexy?

Did Sam smell the sex on her?

Sort of. But mostly Eric's scent all over her.

Nice icon, by the way. ;)