I'm Taken

Feb 18, 2014 17:23

“Look, I don’t want you going over there just because he sneezes and needs a tissue to wipe his nose.  He’s got your mommy to do that.”  Leaning back against the sofa in his and Katie’s living room, Reid frowned at Luke sitting next to him.

Luke could tell that Reid wasn’t really all that irked but suspected the doctor wasn’t all completely at ( Read more... )

luke snyder, as the world turns, reid oliver

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chloebroefan February 19 2014, 02:51:32 UTC
This fic is so on point for me - I have never understood Noah/Luke fans because in all my days watching this was Noah's voice. This is why Reid, a self admitted egomaniac asshole, was still a thousand times better for Luke than Noah would ever dream of being. Excellent, excellent fic, thank you for sharing.

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petuniagirl February 19 2014, 03:02:15 UTC
Thank you!!! I didn't mind Noah too much in the beginning, but I found them to be a bit boring as a couple. But from the storyline of Luke getting kicked out of school forward, I really grew to dislike him. Nuke started reminding me a lot of the Holden-Lily relationship where one party was always critical and the other was always in the wrong. Yuck.

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petuniagirl February 19 2014, 23:11:58 UTC
Thank you for the epic comment!

I can't imagine Luke ever souring on all aspects of his relationship with Noah. It just doesn't seem very Luke-like. If Luke never totally soured on his parents, then Noah has nothing to worry about, lol.

Your welcome for the squinting. I'm not sure how many times I've actually written Noah in a fic, but I'm certain squinting is featured 100% of the time, lol.

Thanks for the sparkly hearts, too. You know I'm pretty much a middle school girl at heart. Glad you enjoyed that passage!

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amyafa February 19 2014, 08:50:32 UTC
I was so happy to see you wrote something.

I loved the fun bantering between Luke and Reid in the first part.

Then in came Noah. You never told me he was gorgeous Luke. So he must be in to me.

Poor Luke he had to be invited for his ex to ask someone else out. It was just perfect that that someone is Reid and very into Luke.

It was sad to see Luke so worried about if Reid still wanted to be with him after this Noah debacle.

I am glad Reid now knows what kind of scars Noah lI know eft on Luke. It was perfect how Reid confessed his love for Luke.

Just the way he is.

I know Reid will make Luke more confident. And Luke will make Reid deliriously happy.

Thank you so much.

This was a great start of my day.

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hilja83 February 19 2014, 12:48:42 UTC
OMG, this is priceless, I cant tell what I love most, I just loved it from top to bottem.

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scotianova February 19 2014, 19:41:54 UTC

“This is serious?” Reid asked, looking around like he expected someone with a camera to jump out to capture the moment.

FUNNY SCENARIO!!!

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chloebroefan February 19 2014, 23:47:37 UTC
Yep, he was looking for Alan Funt...I think that's the name of the Candid Camera guy!

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