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Bleach Drabble (460-461)

Jul 27, 2006 14:05

460.

Title: Sharper Than They Look
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: Eleventh division, slight hints of ShuuheixYumichika
Word Count: 752
Warning/s: Vague spoilers for Shuuhei and Yumichika’s fight in the SS arc, but nothing overt. Some OOCness and random speculation.
Summary: Everyone’s talking about Yumichika.
Dedication: sophiap- I saw your prompt ( Read more... )

uraharaxyoruichi, soi fong, urahara+soi fong, yoruichixsoi fong, kenpachi, urahara+mayuri, yoruichi, yumichika, urahara, bleach, eleventh division, yachiru, ikkaku

Comments 14

bellezainfantil July 27 2006, 21:41:08 UTC

Okay. So. Found this journal through FF.net, friended on impulse (hope you don't mind). Apparently your drabbles are more advanced in this journal than of ff.net...;__;. Just an overall comment on your writing: akjafjakjflfa awesome. I especially love the first drabble cause 11th division is thug love. I don't see anything that needs editing at the moment but that might be cause i'm blinded by the shiny. *shamelessly fangirls* Maybe if I come back later I can be of more help....

peroxidepest17 July 27 2006, 23:04:16 UTC

Haha yes, I'm WAY ahead posting here than I am on ff.net. Probably because it's just easier for me to update here instead of go through all the document inspectors there, so I get lazy about it. XD But happy to see you here! I also can talk to the people who comment here more easily than I can on ff.net so it's always a pleasure to see people coming over from there. ^_^ Hope to hear lots from you in the future!

sophiap July 27 2006, 23:51:05 UTC

*beams* Another dedication, even though I haven't finished your bribe fic! I am feeling both flattered and guilty. Anyhow, I love the idea that both Ikkaku and Zaraki have figured out (at least part of) Yumichika's little secret in very different ways. Also, the idea that Yachiru can talk to other people's zanpakutou is fabulous.

The bit that got me laughing until I was in pain, however, was the exchange about the "vacuum." It took me a second to get it, and then I just cracked up.

peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 01:01:04 UTC

Haha don't feel bad! I like writing your requests, you usually give me prompts that have tons I can work with, which really, ends up being a lot more inspiring than the ones where you can only write like, ONE set thing. XD

And yes. I had to put a dirty joke about Shuumi in there just cuz... I'm perverted like that. XD

shyunpo July 28 2006, 01:16:01 UTC

TOO. CUTE. XDXD OMG. PeroPero.. Soi's so adorable here.. and Ura.. the bloody tease and his huge heart, his personality, kissing Yoru... *giggles insanely* This is was too cute... and just.. everything about it. So Soi.. irritable and infatuated Soi. ♥ Perfect. Seriously. You had me in giggles. Totally meming. Definitely. =3

peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 01:52:11 UTC

Glad you liked Reki. ^^

zombie_grey July 28 2006, 02:14:22 UTC

Well, it's been awhile since I've been able to take a vaccuum seriously, and the first piece didn't help any. XD

In the second, I just love the way you write Urahara's little, oh-so-logical reasons for doing everything he does. <3

peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 02:46:16 UTC

Haha vacuum is a funny word too.

*is totally mature, whut* >>

As for Urahara, he's Always helpful! XD

ainbthen July 28 2006, 08:04:58 UTC

So cute! That last one just killed me. Urahara is awesome, and you write him perfectly!

Loved the first one. I always love all your 11th Division stuff. This one was really interesting, making me think about Yumi and his zanpakto. And Yachiru and her rocks are the cutest things ever!

peroxidepest17 July 28 2006, 18:31:14 UTC

Haha I have lots of friends who say I'm like Urahara. I wonder about that sometimes...