Bleach Drabble (448)

[peroxide_fic]

*rolls* I am so unprepared for the coming days.

448.

Title: Movin’ on Up
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: Eleventh Division
Word Count: 999
Warning/s: Spoilers for the SS arc and vague ones for the current Arrankar arc.
Summary: Yumichika and Ikkaku get promoted. In a way.
Dedication: Soph- ARGH OMG that Shuumi was just. GUH.
A/N: I am a

Comments

[jensa_chan]

Something about the phrase "afeared" really, really made me wince. I think it's the hicksville connotations.

Otherwise, lovely. ♥

[peroxidepest17]

Haha I am totally from TX. XD

[strigine]

THUG LOVE.

couldn’t really be subtleer’n that
one e in subtle/subtler

wanted to be one so what... you could
Not a typo, but I'd put a comma in: "so, what" or even "so, what, you"

[peroxidepest17]

Durhur typos KILL. Thanks!

[148km]

Zaraki snorted, because that was kinda gay. But even when he thought about it in a not-gay-way, it was still retarded.

XDDDDDDD

I laughed so hard I didn't even notice edits that may be needed. ;D *wipes away a tear of MIRTH*

[peroxidepest17]

Haha glad you found it amusing! XD

[carameltrap]

LOOL. I so need some laughs after my day. ^___^

[peroxidepest17]

Laughs are always good. ^^

[ainbthen]

How do you *do* that, write the 11th division as just so perfect and awesome and make Kenpachi so wooby and awesome and I just want to hug them all? This was completly wonderful, and just what I needed, thank you!

[peroxidepest17]

Ehehe I think of my family a lot of the time, really. We encourage each other by pissing each other off. XD