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Bleach Drabble (444-445)

Jun 23, 2006 19:54

Nnnnrgh. I SUCK.

444.

Title: Peace Between Nations
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: GanjyuxHanatarou
Word Count: 999
Warning/s: No spoilers, but some OOC I guess. XD
Summary: A study in diplomacy between warring nations
Dedication: sherrymarie- C’MON YOU KNOW YOU WANNA PLAY.
A/N: Right. Four hundred-and-forty-four, for the record. BUT it’s not like I ( Read more... )

byakuya, ganjyuxhanatarou, rukia, bleach, ichigo, mercy street

Comments 41

from jeina anonymous June 24 2006, 13:41:58 UTC

parting his HAIR differently???? she noticed stuff like that??? XD i can so see rukia's maniacal superior look...jabbing a finger at ichigo...and getting thrown out the window <3 hilarious, lady. good job~

Re: from jeina peroxidepest17 June 24 2006, 19:06:13 UTC

Haha if it's just a small change for someone like Byakuya I figure it would be a HUGE deal to the people who know him. XD

yukitsu June 24 2006, 15:15:18 UTC

The ukes win over their semes. >3

peroxidepest17 June 24 2006, 19:06:25 UTC

As it should be. XD

zombie_grey June 25 2006, 00:35:03 UTC

Your line about Rukia's unholy something was beautiful. That and the mental image of her being thrown out the window was enough to finally bring me out of lurking and comment on how much fun your stories are to read. XD

I enjoyed both immensely. ^_^

peroxidepest17 June 25 2006, 00:50:59 UTC

Yay! I'm always glad to have lurkers delurk! Glad you liked it and hope to hear more from you in the future! ^^

eternalsayonara June 25 2006, 03:04:39 UTC

Hanatarou sounding distressed is always the first thing to set the new eleventh division shinigami off, and before he knows what he’s doing he’s got either fist in either of his mens’ faces.

Should be "men's", I think.

[Rukia] declares, putting her hands on her hips and looking superior to everyone else in the universe.

Loved that line. ^___^

*goes back to lurking*

peroxidepest17 June 25 2006, 03:28:04 UTC

Whoops! Thanks for that. ^^

chibify June 25 2006, 13:30:54 UTC

Along with that line...

Hanatarou sounding distressed is always the first thing to set the new eleventh division shinigami off, and before he knows what he’s doing he’s got either fist in either of his men’s faces.

Maybe try... uh... "he's got one fist in either of his men's faces" ...maybe? I just found the 'either either' to be a lil awkward.

But very very good writings :D Your writings always make me wanna write more ^_^ (lucky you ^.~)

chibify June 25 2006, 13:43:13 UTC

RljfljdflFdjd

Absolutely ADORED the Mistress of the House one XDXDXD Ichigo and Rukai's interaction is just great

peroxidepest17 June 25 2006, 21:07:30 UTC

IchiRuki is great. XD