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Bleach Drabble (406-407)

Apr 11, 2006 19:19

This is me trying to be productive today. o.o

406.

Title: Biological Clock
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: ShuuxYumi, Iba, Renji, lightly IkkakuxKira
Word Count: 575
Warning/s: No spoilers I can imagine. Just um, OOC crack. XD
Summary: Babies.
Dedication: Anyone who writes me ShuuxYumi right now, I mean it. WITHDRAWAL.
A/N: Yeaaah, I don’ ( Read more... )

ikkakuxkira, kyourakuxukitake, thugs, bleach, shuuheixyumichika, renji, yachiru, iba

Comments 26

chrismakkuh April 12 2006, 03:11:18 UTC

*beams*

Love!!

I don't see anything that seems wrong...

maaaaaybe I should go read again... _>

peroxidepest17 April 12 2006, 21:37:35 UTC

Yay! The thought of no typos makes me happy. XD

wolfiel April 12 2006, 03:21:23 UTC

"What a naughty boy to shoot the old poet like that, who had taken him into his warm room, had been so good to him, and had given him the nicest wine and the best apple!"

Um... is it just me.. or does that line sound reaaallly dirty? 0-0;;;

peroxidepest17 April 12 2006, 21:38:15 UTC

Ah, stories from a more innocent time, eh? XD

But either way it's kind of fitting, given that Ukitake likes to lure little Shirou-chan to his room with snacks and sweets. o.o

148km April 12 2006, 03:22:09 UTC

Somehow, the idea of Yumi wanting babies seems completely plausible. XD And then the thugs, oh dear. ♥ Especially Iba at the end, that was great. XD

peroxidepest17 April 12 2006, 21:38:39 UTC

Iba is so precious. XD

amona April 12 2006, 04:08:34 UTC

Plant that tells time or somethin?

That started great :D
And I love the way you do the Ikkaku/Kira pairing~
Have a feeling that Yumi is going to find a way to get a 'yachiru'

And the Ukitake/Kyouraku was just lovely

peroxidepest17 April 12 2006, 21:39:04 UTC

Yumi always does get what he wants in the end, doesn't he?

Maybe I spoil him. XD

shini_tenshi April 12 2006, 04:16:00 UTC

Ahh, Yumi... I'll have your babies. *is shot*

Seriously, I loved 406. Sure you don't wanna drop the rest of the crew and write ShuuxYumi 24/7? 'Cause you write this alt pair better than most people write canon.

peroxidepest17 April 12 2006, 21:40:09 UTC

Oh man, I should totally be writing more ShuuxYumi anyway,I KNOW. I just feel like there's a general drought lately though. I mean it. If someone writes it/draws it for me my heart will soar.

I'm a fickle writer like that... INSPIRE MEEE. XD

shini_tenshi April 12 2006, 23:07:05 UTC

You mean you want me to suggest plot bunnies?
.....
1. Continuation of the 'Yumi wants babies', where he goes to the Research Institute and gets them involved.

2. Meet the parents (unless you've already done one like that) of either or both of them.

3. Getting married... or attending someone else's wedding, and the wackiness that ensues.
....

In general, I'm not a good writer, because it's hard for me to think up/ continue stories that I've started. Especially for this fandom. TT