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Bleach Drabble (113-114)

Aug 13, 2005 00:11

Yeah, I've been lazy over the past few days, haven't I? ^^;;

Title: Practical Examination
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: GanjyuxHanatarou (vaguely)
Word Count: 748
Warning/s: Spoilers by proxy? Dunno. O.o
Summary: Companion Drabble to the chain of drabbles that began with #46 (Please State Your Reason for Applying)- Ganjyu helps Hanatarou ( Read more... )

ganjyuxhanatarou, bleach, ryuuken, uryuu

Comments 25

starswing August 13 2005, 07:24:26 UTC

Ryuuken is so awesome. <3 Except for the "BETRAY YOUR FRIENDS" bit.

Oh, and Ganjyuu's reaction at the end of the first cracked me up. XD Still dazed from wisdom teeth surgery, but WOW.

peroxide_fic August 13 2005, 15:46:14 UTC

I'm sure there's SOMETHING behind that bit, really. ^^;;

hardlyfatal August 13 2005, 12:49:35 UTC

The first one was great, I love how thrilled Hanatarou was at it all! Your writing of this pairing just makes me smile.

The second was sore, like a bruise you can't stop prodding to feel the pain again-- that's how the repetition felt. Good work on that. You did a good job portraying a practical, pragmatic man who's uncomfortable showing emotions and his regret over missing something he knows is important.

One issue: it's "pores" not "pours" when someone is absorbed over something ;) But apart from that, they were good; thanks!

peroxide_fic August 13 2005, 15:46:23 UTC

Thanks!

ex_rong August 13 2005, 13:34:17 UTC

Aw The Ryuuken fic melted my heart. Im all squishy and squashy now.

peroxide_fic August 13 2005, 15:46:37 UTC

*squishes you* Yay!

ex_rong August 13 2005, 15:47:49 UTC

*piak*

peroxidepest17 September 4 2005, 06:20:58 UTC

Ahaha interesting noise there. :P

go_hifreann_lea August 13 2005, 17:05:17 UTC

Yay, my first Ganjyu/Hanatarou fic! And it was so nice and . . . heh. Good job. I don't have a way with words. xD

peroxidepest17 August 14 2005, 09:44:28 UTC

It's okay, I'm just glad you liked it! My job is merely to spread the GanjyuxHanatarou love. XD ^^y

_junkun August 13 2005, 17:26:23 UTC

Okay, enough with the sexual tension--its time for make-out parties, staring Ganjyu and Hanatarou! :-[[ ....please? (sobs)

ps, other than me craving some touchy-feely action, man, i get so excited when i see your posts! Seriously. I go, "YESSSSSSSSSSSS SCORE". ♥

peroxidepest17 August 14 2005, 09:46:07 UTC

Ahahaha I just can't get over the cute fluff, myself, I think. But I have been wanting more and more, to at least give them their first kiss, so I'll try and think on how to work that in there without straying too far from how I've been writing them, because really, them being clueless is just kind of my comfort zone for them. ^^;;