XXXHolic- "Never Gone"

[peroxide_fic]

Title: Never Gone
Universe: XXXHolic
Theme/Topic: Kink Meme fic!
Rating: PG
Character/Pairing/s: lightly DoumekixWatanuki
Warnings/Spoilers: Vague spoilers through ch 182
Word Count: 1,835
Summary: Even when the mind forgets the body remembers.
Dedication: beltenebra’s thank you fic! Using #6 on your kink list (kind of?). I was going to write you JE but

Comments

[imifumei]

Oh, Pero. I love you. Amy told me not to read this at work because it would make me cry. I should have listened.

It's beautiful and completely heartbreaking. No, it would have been more heartbreaking if they weren't together. But still.

Umm, I don't actually know what to say. Nice things, though.

I <3 you so much.

[peroxidepest17]

<333 I'm so glad! I feel real out of practice with most of my animanga so it was nice to have a chance to come back to it again. ^_^

[anyjen]

Awesome. I read it through twice in quick succession, just because it was so good... I love how Doumeki is still stubbornly dogging Watanuki despite not having any memories of why that matters, and how Watanuki is still bothered by this, but would hurt terribly if Doumeki wasn't there. They're exactly as I imagine they would be if they couldn't remember any of the things they went through during highschool.

oh, and:

Yuuko as a university lecturer teaching classes while still drunk = WIN.

Edits:

“As expected from the heir to a shrine.”

Doumeki is the heir to a temple, not a shrine.

His brow furrowed is again, like he’s thinking some more.

"His brow is furrowed again"

“For your projects, I want you and your partners to do give a presentation

"to give a presentation"

Doumeki doesn’t feel the need respond.

"the need to respond"

He feels determinedly resolute in his declaration-more so than any before-

"more so than any time before"

[peroxide_fic]

I CAN SPAEK ENRISH NO RLY. XD

[anyjen]

Sorry. I'm kind of a grammar nazy. I usually rein it in, but you asked if there were any errors, soooo... ^^U

[peroxidepest17]

No problem! better caught early than late.

[keleosnoonna]

That was soooo good, and kinda bittersweet XD
I loved it!

[peroxidepest17]

Glad you liked ^_^

[zeldas]

That was lovely and, just, ouch. I've been rereading Holic recently and dreading about what's going to happen to Domeki, or how he'll end up. Though I keep on hoping Watanuki will be there, flailing about and just being there, like in here. Even if this sort of plot makes me all kinds of )':

[peroxidepest17]

Oh man i think everyone is extremely worried at this point; it all seems like a big set up to BREAK OUR HEARTS somehow. I kind of bite my nails and hesitate every time a new chapter comes out nowadays. o.o

[purble]

0.0

Yuuko must have granted his wish then...

It's cute how when everything is said and done, those two are still bound together (the more things change, the more things stay the same). Though their current world seems to give off the feeling of being incomplete.

Good job.

[peroxidepest17]

Glad you liked!