JE/NewS- "In Tiny Forward Motions"

[peroxide_fic]

Title: In Tiny Forward Motions
Universe: JE/NewS (Government Agent AU)
Theme/Topic: N/A
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: NewS (guest appearances by and/or mentions of members of Arashi, KAT-TUN, V6, T&T, and TOKIO; i.e. everyone. LOL)
Warnings/Spoilers: AU, OOC, randomness. The usual.
Word Count: 6,566
Summary: In the universe related to “To

Comments

[thawrecka]

This is awesome! I love this AU. No matter how different it is to boyband world the characterisations are so solid.

[peroxidepest17]

I try to tell myself it's okay to keep writing in AU as long as everyone is at least a recognizable facsimile of themselves. Or that's what Ann tells me when I whine to her about how I've copped out and turned into one of those dreaded AU writers that plague fandoms everywhere with bad ideas. XD

[thawrecka]

That really is all that matters. That and writing with heart. Don't worry, I always think I've turned into that badfic girl, too.

[win03die]

"Volatile Mechanics Unit" = ROFL. I CAN IMAGINE KEN ;D

“No one is going to look at you and believe that you snapped that man’s neck with your thighs, Agent.”
SHO. ILU. And tego too but that's yesterday's news. NEWS. err.

u know, he said something about working out a lot lately?
..and what's that about a new tegomass-single?
-FLAIL-

“You look as sweet as candy, baby face."
I can see MatsuJun saying that. with the scary look of his. Ryo should protect Tego ;]

“you’re fighting has gotten really strong ne!”
- your?
and omg massu is as stupid (clueless) as yamapi.

"TOKIO is the best in the country for these types of things, you know.”
YES. love you for mentioning TOKIO here. they're awesome.

and just because i want to ramble: i am so happy for takki in this because it really was him who "made" yamapi.

[win03die]

and i forgot to mention that ryotego melted my heart (me) into puddle.
GOD they're lovely. so.. "nnnnngh"-feeling if you get me.

[peroxidepest17]

HAHA VMU=V6 is probably the worst acronym pun to DATE, but it was honestly all I could think of. -_-;;

ALSO, thanks for the edit. *flails*

[win03die]

SQUEE. I read this: "Also, right after Ryo’s solo-line, he stumbles on stage and causes Tegoshi to giggle (Yamapi just looks amused). Then Ryo himself is chuckling with Koyama and ends up being all embarrassed about it and actually turns his back to camera.
When the boys all come together for the last choruses in the center-platform, he and Tegoshi are giggling and grinning at each other like idiots all the way ’til the end even after it (Ryo even stumbles (again!), almost falls down and then re-enacts his fail).
You don’t usually see Ryo acting all silly in ’serious’ performances with NEWS, so Tegoshi can really bring out the child in him.
These two… dorks ;)" from from here and went totally... <3<3<3<3
because before, it was uchi and now ryotego are just acting all adorable (in NATIONAL TV!) annd... NNGH.
<3

[vreemd23]

i really love this AU *____*

[peroxidepest17]

So glad you do! It makes me hate myself less for writing in AU when enough people enjoy it. ^_^;;

[xarwenz]

-ilu for writing this au. it's so realistic that i almost don't want to believe it's only a fic. your characterization is dead on it hurts.

-mention of V6!! include okada nxt time!!! pretty pwease (with big tego eyes)

-when you decide that uchi is finally waking up, you have to write the ryo in frilly apron scene

[peroxidepest17]

Haha Okada got mentioned in one of the fics I actually threw away from this series; I have like more of those than I ought to. -_-;;

[mousapelli]

asdlkgjlgkjagklhjaelkahaj AAWWWWWWWWW. SO CUTE. AND AWESOME. AND I WANT SECRET AGENT NEWS ALL THE TIME.

Yamapi and Massu's parts made me sniffle, and Tego's part made me crack up. Tackey definitely gets cute-senpaied by Tego XD XD XD

and aww, Ryo. ♥

[peroxidepest17]

I WISH I COULD READ MY OWN WORK WITHOUT HATING IT. Write me some Secret Agent NewS so I can see what you see in it. XD

Tackey totally gets owned by Koyama on that TackeyTsuba Intro Don so I could see him falling victim to Tego too, all things considered. KOUHAI POWER.