JE/NewS- "In Tiny Forward Motions"

[peroxide_fic]

Title: In Tiny Forward Motions
Universe: JE/NewS (Government Agent AU)
Theme/Topic: N/A
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: NewS (guest appearances by and/or mentions of members of Arashi, KAT-TUN, V6, T&T, and TOKIO; i.e. everyone. LOL)
Warnings/Spoilers: AU, OOC, randomness. The usual.
Word Count: 6,566
Summary: In the universe related to “To

Comments

[wanderingreen]

love the parallels! they really mirror the real world situation. xD the ryotego scene made me awwwww. In fact the whole ryo part was adorable.

The part about being a leader and how Pi didn't know how to lead, only follow was just so bleak (and makes so much sense even when compared to RL :x)

love the universe you created =D and I can so imagine the shige scene happening for real...

[peroxidepest17]

Pi just looked so clueless to me in those early days of NewS, like he didn't know what to say or do to the rest of them as the leader. So glad he's kind of realized that everyone in his group has the ability to take the lead when it comest to their own particular strengths; I think it's helped him relax a little since.

[wanderingreen]

I think Pi never really was a leader-type at any point in his life...and the early days of NEWS just proved that beyond doubt. Like you said, he was so clueless it's almost painful to watch cus I'm a huge fan of the guy -.-;;

[ayumwu]

a;soifja;wefjae WHAT DOES TOKIO STAND FOR. XDDDD I LOVE HOW V6 MADE AN ENTRANCE HERE. BUT ARASHI IS STILL ONLY A CATEGORY TWO; WHERE ARE THE REST? DDDDDD:

Sho slaps a hand to his forehead at the exact same time Shige does.

LOL oh the smart ones. <3

And I loved the Pi one. <33 Totally sums up his life in a nutshell.

I love you, seriously. TEGOMASS. XDD

[peroxidepest17]

The smart ones totally have it hard.

STILL DON'T KNOW ARASHI MEMBERS; they'll probably be category 2 forever.

TegoMass are totally international super spies at the level of James Bond. TOTALLY.

[ayumwu]

OMG TEGOMASS ONLY GOVERNMENT AGENT AU. LOL. YOU COULD TOTALLY DO SO MUCH WITH THAT. XDDD

Lol, it's hard being smart in JE.

*looks down* Oh. Okay. BYE NINO, OHNO, AND AIBA. *waves* You should really get to know Aiba, because his flakiness is so fun to write. XD

[peroxidepest17]

TegoMass drinking martinis in Sweden and having foreign chicks fall all over them. The image is kind of hysterical.

[ryu_no_sora]

Lovely all the time~ ★

[peroxidepest17]

You are.

[blur_panda]

What a wonderful thing to wake up to on a saturday morning. <3
Your writing and ideas are as brilliant as every, throughly enjoyed every last word of this fic. <33

Also: Ganbatte Notti, Uchi!(u made me like them both more than I used to *thumbs up*), Sho/Shige/Tego LOL, Yamapi really is an enigma ne, and oh Massu. *wibbles* You really nailed his character down perfect. The painfully average, simple guy who turns out to have one of the most tender and gentle of hearts, who won't hurt a gnat at all normally but will become invinsible for the sake others in the blink of an eye. *flail* GAH. So not making sense but hope you get what I totally failed to say?

Thanks for the great read and for being such a awsume -and super fast!(srsly how do u do it D:)- writer! <33333

[blur_panda]

---> "every" *headdesk*
...it's too early (9am on a Sat!), need to get some more sleep lol

[peroxidepest17]

God no one should be up that early on a Saturday morning. CRAZY.

Glad you liked!

[peroxidepest17]

LOL It makes me less ashamed of having written an AU to hear you say you liked it this much. Thanks for the comments!