Bleach- "Broken In"

[peroxide_fic]

Writing at work? Moi? NEVER.

Please don't tell Yoshi about this. >>

Title: Broken In
Universe: Bleach
Theme/Topic: N/A
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing/s: Ikkaku, Yumichika, Kenpachi (mentions of slight KenpachixByakuya and Yachiru).
Warnings/Spoilers: Uh, no spoilers I can imagine. Just the usual crack and OOC, really.
Word Count: 1,274

Comments

[waysm]

*GAH*

So much love!

To everything you write!

[peroxidepest17]

Glad you enjoyed. ^_^

[eclectify]

Hmmmm, I think I can confidently say that I like your characterisation of Yumichika far better in this fic than in the others of yours I've read lately (not to say they weren't awesome as well). He was at his most deviously spectacular here and the way you played him off Ikkaku and Kenpachi was wonderful!

Also, the comment about Kenpachi taking his wife and child to the doctor? Priceless.

Needless to say this is a longwinded way of telling you I loved it ^_^

[peroxidepest17]

Haha I thought he was a bit over the top in this, but I was at the point where I didn't care that much 'cuz I was at work and BORED. I'm finding lately that I don't like the whole devious-and-always-coming-out-on-top Yumi that I usually write, just cuz it was making me feel... I guess, like I was cutting out a good part of the rest of his character? I'm trying new things, in short. LOL But happy you enjoyed it despite that though!

[eclectify]

*laughs* I think despite him being the way you used to write him he was different to...less...I dunno flamboyant I suppose which goes a long way in my book. I can't wait to see how you write him now that you're trying new things!

More people should try and write Yumichika as a more three dimensional character so much props to you! *cheers*

[peroxidepest17]

LOL Yeah, I wish more people would do it too. There is like NO FIC OUT THERE that tries to explore him more. SIGH.

[meretricula]

SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS PAIRING. NO REALLY. WHIPPED!KENPACHI IS THE BEST! [/capslock abuse]

[peroxidepest17]

I LOVE A WHIPPED KENPACHI. XD

[1st_eggokage]

Why must you do this to me? Now I've got yet another complete crack OTP that suddely makes SENSE thanks to you...

And I even have an icon for it...*ded*

[peroxidepest17]

LOL If it makes you feel any better it MAKES SENS TO ME TOO. So at least you're not alone. Most of the time I am alone in these things. XD

[yshani]

For the record, you are made of AWESOME!

[peroxidepest17]

LOL only in a world where crack=awesome, I think. BUT I AM OK WITH THAT. XD