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Bleach- "For Luck"

Feb 20, 2007 18:19

Title: For Luck
Universe: Bleach
Theme/Topic: Baths
Rating: PG
Pairing/Character/s: Yachiru, Nemu, Mayuri
Warnings/Spoilers: Just um, slight spoilers as to what happens to Mayuri after he loses. XD Also, OOC to the max.
Word Count: 1,217
Summary: Yachiru enforces some New Year’s superstitions.
Dedication: shinigamikender’s request on my V-day/New Year’s ( Read more... )

nemu, mayuri, bleach, yachiru

Comments 29

squaresphere February 21 2007, 16:01:01 UTC

hmmm i figured out a templete for writing Nemu.

Nemu starts saying something ridiculous such as a defense of her father.

random character cuts her off and says that's dumb or points out an obvious flaw in her logic.

random character then spouts off something randomly insightful

Nemu contemplates said insightfulness then grows by 1/2% towards having a personality.

Fun fic though, i could see Yachiru coming back doing the luck luck dance in all the rooms and giving everyone 3 leaf clovers for good luck. Course said clovers were made from 4 leaf ones cause she couldn't find any 3 leafs :D

peroxidepest17 February 21 2007, 19:27:29 UTC

LOL I thought the 4 leaf ones were good luck? *clueless*

squaresphere February 21 2007, 19:30:58 UTC

er yeah you're right about the clovers. I always get them mixed up ever since i stopped eating lucky charms when I was 7 :P.

hah that would be funny, Yachiru eating lucky charms thinking that it would bring good luck... too bad it made of SOLID SUGAR ;)

peroxidepest17 February 21 2007, 19:40:59 UTC

LOL funny how we all seem to learn those sorts of cultural things from... TV commercials. XD That's where I learned it too.

nosferatu_blue February 23 2007, 23:56:29 UTC

Oh man this is so funny!! Poor Nemu, stuck between a rock and a hard place. I liked how the water would bristle indignantly at whatever Yachiru said. (I also love how Mayuri didn't completely freak on Nemu for letting Yachiru in there.)

peroxidepest17 February 24 2007, 02:30:27 UTC

Haha I think Mayuri knows from experience that she's pretty unstoppable. XD

1st_eggokage March 4 2007, 01:09:41 UTC

Awwww, Yachiru-chan! *gives the little pink-headed psycho New Year's money* I just love how you write Yachiru (and the rest of her insane division, for that matter).

And Mayuri? YOU FAIL AT LIFE. No cleaning without a luck-luck dance! But Nemu doesn't fail. ^_^ *hugs Nemu*

Lovely writing, as usual!

peroxidepest17 March 4 2007, 03:41:08 UTC

Haha at least Mayuri has figured out a sure fire way to avoid her. XD

arsenicgraffiti March 5 2007, 01:58:26 UTC

Hilarious. XD The idea of goo managing to express emotion is highly amusing. ^_^

peroxidepest17 March 5 2007, 02:07:57 UTC

LOL if there is any goo out there that could... XD