Eyeshield 21- "Crime and Punishment"

[peroxide_fic]

Title: Crime and Punishment
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Character/s: lightly JyuumonjixSena, Hiruma, Yukimitsu, Monta
Word Count: 498
Warning/s: None I can imagine
Summary: Sena has more than his own team’s welfare riding on his back.
Dedication: sw_inku’s request on my other lj! Are you feeling better yet, m’dear?
A/N: The request was “punishment.” Thanks

Comments

[sw_inku]

*SPARKLE* I LOVE PEROPERO!
Eeeeeeeeee!
I'm full of happy now!
And yes I am feeling mostly better now! I'm going to eat my firest meal since monday today! And my headache has finally stopped after two days! :D
Thank you! T^Tb

[peroxidepest17]

YAY I AM GLAD YOU'RE FEELING BETTER. ^_^

[time_spellbook]

Heee. That's absolutely priceless. You do JyuuSena so wonderfully.

[peroxidepest17]

LOL thanks! It is my crack OTP of choice. ^_^

[sparda219]

Oh god that was FABULOUS. XDDD

I think the heat-seeking missle comment was my favorite. <3<3<3<3 He breaks people's legs. XD

Let's hope Jyuumonji is gentler at other times. >.>

[peroxidepest17]

LOL I admit I wrote this the way I did purely out of the desire to make Jyuu look hot beating guys up.

Though oddly enough I really want to see him drawn as a puppy now too. LOL

[sparda219]

XDDDD Puppy!Jyuu.

Boys do look hot kicking ass for the ones they love. <3<3<3<3<3 And thanks to you I actually got into Eyeshield. XD

Hiruma always cracks me up.

[peroxidepest17]

LOL Hiruma is definitely the game master here. XD

[karaq]

Awwww.. so cute. so cute, SO FREAKING CUTE! XD
(Yes, I mush have a problem) Lol. I really love how you write hints to Jyuu/Sena. Great work! ^^

~KaraQ

[peroxidepest17]

Glad you like!

[chrysan]

Too cute. Too CUTE! Jyuu/Sena is so very full of awkward speech and expressions that they are both too endearing for words~XDXD

[peroxidepest17]

It is the way of the thug/wimp ship. XD