FIC- Lies for Love Part Nineteen

[perfect_pride]

Title: Lies for love
Pairing: Thirteen/Cameron, Thirteen/Cuddy
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Pretty much zilch. This is set at the beginning of Season 5 when House has his new team but contains nothing about them specific to episodes.
Disclaimer: I own... nada.
Summary: Thirteen can't remain faithful and risks losing everything that matters to her.

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Comments

[suspenderlove]

Heartbreaking :( House is being such an ass to Thirteen! It's so sad, especially when listening to 'Cuddy's serenade' xD And such a poor Chase as well :( You're really giving the characters a difficult time there. (I sort of like that). You update very quickly, where do you get the time for it? I'm looking forward to the next chapter. It's not very constructive critisism, but do not blame me, blame my stomach ache (lol).

ps.
Sorry I didn't comment on part 18 yet, haven't had time for it.

[perfect_pride]

Hey, thanks! Yeah... I have gone heavy on the angst, haven't I? I can't help it. :P
The updates are quicker now because I've already written the rest of the fic. It's just a case of going through each individual part before it's posted to check for spelling errors etc. There are 25 parts altogether and I'm trying to get them all up before I go away.
Am going to shove up another part in a bit! :)

[slvrglm]

I can sort of see where House is coming from, but I still think he's an ass >_<

Let up a little on Thirteen in the next chapter! I personally think Cuddy's had enough time. They should just get back together NAO. :D

(ignore me. that would make for a really bad story.)

[perfect_pride]

Yeah... he's an ass.
NAO? Whazzat?
Hahaha yeah. Quick ending.

"13 woz well sorry & Cuddy 4gave her asap cuz she woz up 4 sex.
Da end."

That quick enough for you? ;)

Don't worry, it isn't long until the end now!

[slvrglm]

omg datz da best ending evarrrr.
HAHA.

Okay, I guess I can wait a little longer...

and NAO is just...nao...like, "now" misspelled.

Lies for Love 19

[korenap]

Must comment here. Why do I think House knew about 13 and Cuddy from the beginning? I'm enjoying the way you wrote Thirteen. Cameron works for me too. Cuddy is a bit harder to imagine but I'm enjoying the journey. Keep thinking that this could be worked into a publishable original pretty readily. Okay I've still got some reading time.

Re: Lies for Love 19

[perfect_pride]

Thanks very much for leaving the feedback... it's so long ago since I wrote this that I've forgotten the exact details, but I think from what I remember that House always suspected there was something up!