Chapter Fourteen

Jan 26, 2008 17:40


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Hey Mom. Tried to call you but you didn't pick up.

Just wanted to let you know I got back home okay. Love you.

Jet watched Zuko walk away. )

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armistice_day January 27 2008, 06:02:00 UTC
A veritable deluxe grab-bag of wonders great and small!
- the Anson County Messenger & Intelligencer

Haha, okay, now that is an obscure joke.
But I have to agree with that worthy publication.

A million-billion thanks are not enough for cameos from Bee, Kuruk and the Obviously Gay Duo of Chan and Ruon-Jian! Nor do they suffice for the delicious supporting performances from the Deluxe Apartment in the Sky - oh, Hahn & Joseph is a many splendored thing! ♥

Hell, if it can't cover that stuff, the old million-billion will never do for Jet & Long. Even if I did pop a capillary or something. Oh, the humanity.

All that aside, I'd add that Jet has made off into the forest with what little remains of my poor heart, but that happened long ago.
I'll be happy for him when he is*. ♥

*when Zuko gets his ducks in a row. Bless his little heart.

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jewbrat January 28 2008, 01:14:25 UTC
omg! i didn't realize who she was referring to the characters from the beach! haha! i thought while reading it they were a pair of originals like Kuruk. silly me. (it's especially great since i shipped them during that ep.)

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ali_wildgoose January 28 2008, 02:25:23 UTC
Haha, well, ACTUALLY! Kuruk isn't an original character, either! He was the last Avatar born into the watertribe, as well as a notorious womanizer! We learned about him in the "Escape from the Spirit World" shorts that were on the Nick website last year.

YEAH WE'RE PRETTY MUCH JUST NERDS.

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kitsune_tails January 27 2008, 08:46:30 UTC
I say this chapter is made of win and angst. Indeed!

From my perspective, it was gut wrenching. I've been there. That sick feeling you wrote about. I've been there. And it...is exactly as you say. This chapter had such a strong affect on me.

I can't wait to read more!

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ali_wildgoose January 27 2008, 15:05:27 UTC
Haha, well to be fair to Jet -- he and Long have an unusual relationship! Even if they aren't dating, they'll still be best friends, along with Bee. Of course Jet loves him! Also, admittedly, after everything the universe has put him through, I'm willing to cut him some slack about wanting to spend that night in Zuko's arms instead of alone in his room...

...

OH JET....

*clutches heart*

(hahaha, uh, also, MILE-LONG COMMENTS ARE AWESOME! Thank you so much for taking the time! <3)

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ali_wildgoose January 27 2008, 15:08:12 UTC
Thank you so much for such high praise! I'm really glad you've been enjoying it!

Awwww, I think Jet handled it as best he could -- it was a pretty rotten situation! Hopefully things won't seem quite so hopeless in the morning...

...haha, I say as if I didn't have any control over that... ;3

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buff_iroh January 27 2008, 16:42:41 UTC
*FROTHERSSSSSSS* AAG AGHH AAAAGHHHHHH GAAAAAHHGHHH! *FAINTS*

I HAVENT READ YET, IM JUST FREAKING OUT THAT ITS HERE.

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buff_iroh January 29 2008, 19:22:46 UTC
!!! Everytime I try to comment, I get stopped or I have to do something. So, now, here's my real comment:

<3333333333333 WELL WORTH THE WAIT! Too many favorite parts to mention. I loved the Zhahn dinner! Mmm. And... oh my god, Chan and RJ cameo, hell yeah. And Kuruk was great, too. I love how Jet deals with him.
Once again, another amazing segment of the story. I want PI to go on forever, hehehe :D Im so greedy. LOL.

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