Advent Calendar Day 18: Fiction--The Eye of the Beholder

[ashley_pitt]

TITLE: The Eye of the Beholder
AUTHOR: Ashley-Pitt
GENRE: Slash
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 432
DISCLAIMER: I do not own these characters, nor am I making any money from them. I borrow them once in awhile, but put them away tidily.
A/N: This is my first attempt at a Jack/Stephen story. I hope I do them justice.

Comments

[ashley_pitt]

Thank you!

I can just picture Jack's face whe he says "Ain't I a work of art?"

[ylla]

Aww, I love the contrast of peaceful, sleepy Jack and poor restless Stephen, and I love the way Stephen is clinical and contemplative about *everything*.

And I want to know Stephen's reaction to being called beautiful! (Although maybe it's an old argument by now). They should definitely continue their discussion later :)

[sidlj]

Ah! Right there at the end, I could just picture such a gleam in Russell Crowe's eye. *g*

Huzzah for Art discussions!

ETA: I find I am commenting for a second time! Well, I enjoyed it just as much this time around. LOL.

[heather_mist]

Oh, excellent! I could just see the whole scene and Jack's voice in “Ain’t I a work of art?” rang so true. Fab!

[ashley_pitt]

Thank you!

It was my first attempt at Jack and Stephen. I am glad that it worked.