Comments | pepperony100: Theme 48

zionangel in pepperony100

Theme 48 - Shock

Jul 22, 2008 23:59

Title: Mortality

Author: ZionAngel

Theme: 48 - Shock

Rating: T

Length: 1689 words

Summary: He doesn’t understand his own mortality, and that scares her more than anything.
AN: These keep getting longer. I’ve got to start cutting these down or I’m in trouble.

She spent the last day and a half worrying about where Tony was, and if it had anything ( Read more... )

author-zionangel, theme-048shock, rating-pg13/t

Comments 3

4persephone July 23 2008, 14:11:47 UTC

I am thoroughly enjoying this series and this was just the frosting on the top of a nice fluffy cake. you have a real talent for filling in the gaps in the movie and presenting a very believable picture of what was going on behind the scenes...

I love the conflict you present tat is moving Pepper. In the movie we only get a hint of her literal agony...

I only hope they stop being such damn teases and give us just a little more to hang on to in the second movie...

sare_liz July 23 2008, 17:45:03 UTC

Oh, this is beautiful! You treated this scene perfectly, and it definitely needed to be done. When Pepper goes in to get the data off the ghost drive, she clearly has put 2+2 together and understood that Uncle Obi isn't Tony's ally, but we never see that happen.

Thank you!

tonpep1 July 26 2008, 06:51:56 UTC

It is so funny because I just saw the movie again for the 4th time and this time I really picked up on the fact that Pepper is scared of Stane when he walks in on her in Tony's office. This one shot of yours makes it all make perfect sense. I mean it seems so plausible that she found out everything just as you described it. Really nicely done.