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Fic - A Better Fate Than Wisdom

May 01, 2011 23:27

Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing/Characters: Roy/Riza
Content Advisory: Sex
Words: 1,718
Summary: This is all taking a bit of getting used to. Post-canon, shortly after the move back east.

With thanks to certain people who know who they are for bullying me egging me on.

( They've spent the best part of a decade looking over their shoulders and this is just another secret to add in )

relationship: roy/riza, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, type: fic, character: riza hawkeye, character: roy mustang

Comments 25

likeadeuce May 1 2011, 22:48:22 UTC

Oh, this is gorgeous (and also hot!) I love how this conveys their contact being familiar and yet new at the same time. Lines like:

She's already losing track of how many times she's kissed him.

. . .because of course that means she's been keeping track. And OF COURSE she has a taste for sneaking around.

sixpences May 8 2011, 15:52:35 UTC

Thank you! Hah, she totally does.

lynx212 May 1 2011, 22:53:42 UTC

*hot hot hot*

And very well written.

sixpences May 8 2011, 15:52:58 UTC

Thank you!

ladynorbert May 1 2011, 23:02:22 UTC

Wow. *fans self* That was awesome. And hot.

sixpences May 8 2011, 16:11:23 UTC

*g* Thank you!

bay115 May 2 2011, 00:24:07 UTC

Very nice and quite hot. My favorite part:

"Good." He pulls her closer again, hands sliding further down her back, and she can feel his stomach brushing against hers with every breath. "I really-" he swallows "-this is, um, nice."

Riza is warm all over from the closeness of his body, his breathing a constant rhythm in her ear, and she feels like an adjective several magnitudes greater is in order but she can't quite say it either. "Really nice."

Quite cute. XD

sixpences May 8 2011, 16:16:18 UTC

Thank you!

viviolo May 2 2011, 06:40:19 UTC

Ohhhh they are so sweet and in love and giddy to (cough) explore each other in this new way! And so... ~*~CONSIDERATE~*~ too.

But aaassdg;fhdkf, making sure the other person is okay with what you are doing! Asking how to make it a more pleasurable experience! COMMUNICATION! It's super sexy.

In short, my eyes contain a multitude of cartoon hearts for this fic. <333

sixpences May 8 2011, 16:58:46 UTC

Thank you so much! Haha, they just want to get it RIGHT is all (they are still rather new at this "relationship" business, bless them).