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Fic - A Better Fate Than Wisdom

May 01, 2011 23:27

Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing/Characters: Roy/Riza
Content Advisory: Sex
Words: 1,718
Summary: This is all taking a bit of getting used to. Post-canon, shortly after the move back east.

With thanks to certain people who know who they are for bullying me egging me on.

( They've spent the best part of a decade looking over their shoulders and this is just another secret to add in )

relationship: roy/riza, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, type: fic, character: riza hawkeye, character: roy mustang

Comments 25

izilen May 3 2011, 17:48:20 UTC

YOU KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS, but I'll say I again: I love it I love it I love it. I love how tentative they are about this new part of their relationship, about expressing all those feelings, all the while being clearly very comfortable with each other.

And of course it's always wonderful to see Roy being so considerate and see how their research is going. I would quote all my favourite lines back at you, but I ALREADY DID THAT. So have some hearts <333333333

(We're only the most annoying of enablers)

sixpences May 8 2011, 17:21:38 UTC

<3333 I AM SO GLAD!!

(You are my favourite enablers)

thegreat_edward May 3 2011, 22:26:32 UTC

Oh my god, this was the best piece of fanfiction I've read in quite a while! Aaaaaargh, so cute and hot and awesome. Have you written anything else, and dammit, where can I find it?

thegreat_edward May 3 2011, 22:27:32 UTC

...oh. Nevermind. I found it.

sixpences May 8 2011, 17:25:10 UTC

Thank you so much! Seems like you already found it, but all my fic can be found through my fic index or the tags.

amalnahurriyeh May 4 2011, 23:09:23 UTC

Daaaaaaw. This is very sweet. I love the way the awkwardness works here--it makes things just as new and strange to the reader as to the characters. Riza also comes across very clearly in here, esp. to a reader who doesn't know her.

sixpences May 8 2011, 20:45:36 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad it worked so well, especially for someone unfamiliar with the characters.

aamalie May 6 2011, 03:16:49 UTC

This fiiiiiiiiic. I love the sneaking about and the new relationship related awkwardness and Roy Mustang: Considerate Boyfriend and post-sexytime cuddling and and all your little fanon take-downs and... well, everything! I am just inarticulate with love! IT'S JUST A REALLY NICE FIC, OKAY. ♥_____♥

(Also, hahaha "bullying" -- YOU KNOW YOU LIKED IT.)

sixpences May 21 2011, 15:55:17 UTC

*suddenly realises she has super-overdue comment replies to do*

Thank you so muuuuch <33 this is a very, uh, nice comment.

(you are my favourite bullies).

ningicoco May 10 2011, 03:02:27 UTC

OMG THIS FIC. HOW DID I NEVER SEE THIS?!?!?!?!? I love hoe they're trying to figure out their new relationship and how adorably awkward they are around each other AND YES, COMMUNICATION IS SEXY and I just really love this fic. A LOT. <3333333333333333333

sixpences May 21 2011, 15:56:00 UTC

*late reply is super late*

<333 Thank you so much!