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Carried on a Breeze

Apr 24, 2006 23:46

Title: Carried on a Breeze
Author: nutmeg610
Rating: G
Word Count: 578
Spoilers: er, I don't think so?
Summary: She a window flower, and he a winter breeze...
Notes: This was written for literarylemming's challenge for Charlie/Gabby fic using different poems as prompts. Enjoy. :)

( ...But the flower leaned aside, And thought of naught to say )

Comments 6

winkingannie April 25 2006, 03:53:15 UTC

Aww... I love that they both realized the other missed them. Very sweet and a lovely take on the Robert Frost quote.

fairandbright April 25 2006, 04:04:57 UTC

Thanks! They are so meant to be; they know what the other's feeling! :)

aliaspiral April 25 2006, 03:59:16 UTC

aww. how lovely and sweet and lonely and hopeful, all at once.

i love the gentle connection between them here.

fairandbright April 25 2006, 04:03:54 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you like it!

literarylemming April 26 2006, 02:07:29 UTC

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!

You know, i ALMOST didn't include that Robert Frost snippet. I'm so glad I did now! *HAPPY!*

*hugs!*

fairandbright April 26 2006, 03:30:28 UTC

LOL, thank you!

I'm glad you did! I am sooooo bad at interpreting poetry and it was one of the few poems that I 'got.' :)