Naruto :: Forgiveness One More Time :: PG :: no pairings

[pen_x_pistol]

Title: Forgiveness One More Time
Fandom: Naruto
Pairings: None
Rating: PG
Genre: General, drama
Word count: 3,905
Spoilers: Yes, for Sasuke's/Itachi's pasts. Their REAL pasts, note.
Summary: Sometimes, at the end of the line, even the most stubborn know when to quit -- and luckily the more stubborn are there to keep their heads above the water.

Comments

[perezosamente]

That was... absolutely amazing. My God, I never know what to say about your stories without sounding really hokey, but that was just... so good. I really enjoyed how you captured Tsunade's personality, and I loved--loved--the entire premise of this thing. I could see it happening, you know? And oh Sasuke, you silly lil' thing.

All in all... I LOVED IT. ♥

We need to do something with Tsunade and Sasuke one of these days in your musebox, y/y?

-THIS LJ IS TOTALLY COINCIDENTAL, FYI-

[his_light]

TYYY~! :3 I was. REALLY unsure about some of it, but with the manga lately, I thought "WTF he's going to snap sooner or later, poor kid. :|" And I'm glad Tsunade came off okay, given how bleh Sasuke was through most of it. ♥ TY, BB.

Y. YYY. :D AND once Deidara's through with him, we could get to that LSG healing thread we never did do from forever ago?

YEAH, OKAY.

[perezosamente]

NP, MAN. And yeeeeeeeah, I think he's going to wind up snapping, too. I mean, seriously... even Karin is freaked out by him now lmfao.

YESSSSSSSSSSSS THAT SOUNDS WONDERFUL. I'll be here whenever you want to go at it, bb. Just... ping me or something. God, I still haven't added you on AIM, what is wrong with me....

PFFT.

[its_game_time]

I kinda liked that, though! Maybe now she'll get off. >_>

YEI! :D ...I honestly can't. Remember. If I added you, although if I had your SN, I know I would have; I just haven't been on AIM forever. XD; broknbutterfly45 = me if you don't have it already. ♥

[sweet_iolanthe]

can I say LOVE?
YESH! Holy cows it was so perfect and their parallel. guh, just magnificent the way you draw them together and all. very good. godness, just brilliant writing as always.
memories.
:D

[alory_shannon]

...I...do not know how I missed reading this fic. 8|; But I was looking through old notifs, and.

Hating Itachi - trying to hate him - was so much easier than loving him with the knowledge of what he had done, and why.

This line. I don't know why I'm ever surprised when you point out things like this where Sasuke is concerned, things that I knew subconsciously but hadn't actively realised or really thought about. All we've really seen in the manga so far is Sasuke feeling guilty for hating Itachi and hating the people who made him into a traitor. He hasn't really thought about it, hasn't really gotten over his anger enough to realise that a lie told for a good reason is still a lie, and it can still hurt.

The Sasuke + Tsunade interaction is so great, too. I can see a lot of the LSG Tsunade + Sasuke-ness influence here, which is 110% a good thing. :]