Comments | pen37: Fic: Ex Machina (7/9)

pen37

Fic: Ex Machina (7/9)

Dec 13, 2007 07:47

Fic: Ex Machina (7/9)
Series: Special Projects
Summary: After their experience with the Demon Meg, Chloe is broken. Dean is shattered. Somehow, they've got to find a way back, while at the same time figuring out how to stop a Demon-made Artificial Intelegence.
Author: pen37
Beta: Clarksmuse
Fandoms: Smallville/Supernatural/DCU
Characters: Chloe, ( Read more... )

special projects, crossovers_100, supernatural, chloe, chloe/dean, sam, smallville, dean

Comments 28

luke2 December 13 2007, 15:07:41 UTC

Sweet! I really adored the conversation between Clark and Dean. It just felt real. Like what Clark would have said and how Dean would have reacted. I like that they're good, but not, you know BFFs or anything close.

Also, Chloe getting a piece of the code. Awesome.

pen37 December 13 2007, 15:19:30 UTC

Thanks! I'm especially proud of the Dean/Clark interaction myself.

fonapola December 13 2007, 17:27:49 UTC

Oh I can just imagine the inner debate Dean was having over whether or not to punch Clark.

And nice set-up for Christmas :) Looking forward to it.

pen37 December 13 2007, 19:05:18 UTC

Thanks. I think you guys are going to enjoy that one.

damnation, I *squeed* in the office! katelennon December 13 2007, 17:47:02 UTC

and then prompty had to LIE my ass off to explain myself. There is no way my office administrator would understand my utter glee at Clark/Dean. I told her I won a pair of shoes on Ebay.

EeEEEEEEE! Dean/Clark awesomeness! Is it wrong I want them to play cards and Dean to kick Clark's ass because he sucks at bluffing? Really?

Re: damnation, I *squeed* in the office! pen37 December 13 2007, 19:07:33 UTC

Except that Clark would totally cheat and use his X-ray vision.

Is it wrong that I'm excited that I made you have to lie to your boss XD

YES. katelennon December 14 2007, 15:25:58 UTC

but it's okay, because well, you're evil (as evidenced by the fact that Dean and Chloe have STILL not done the horizontal lambada) so, I give you slack.

Hee! Going OOT with the family for our "Christmas" weekend.

Ayee!

Re: YES. pen37 December 14 2007, 15:35:31 UTC

Maybe if you're a good little girl, Santa will bring you Chlean doing the horizontal lambada for christmas.

And now, thanks to you, I can't say that without thinking of kinky sex involving flamingoes or yellow feather boas.

*shakes head*

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angelbsb December 13 2007, 23:03:26 UTC

i like how dean and clark are now sort of friends . loved how chloe got part of the demon ai and now there working on a way to beat it .clark's right him and chloe have always been family. keep up the great writing .

pen37 December 13 2007, 23:22:40 UTC

I wouldn't exactly say friends. But at least they agree to tolerate each other. It's a start.

mfsaw2003 December 14 2007, 02:33:30 UTC

I am really happy that Clark and Dean have come to an understanding, mainly because I don't want Dean to fly off the handle, hit clark, and shatter his fist. Wow Clark has grown since his days in Smallville and it's nice to see that he respects Chloe's judgment enough that he accepts Dean. Giving him that piece of meteor rock was a nice touch because it has the capability of putting Clark and Dean on the same level.

As an aside, after watching Supernatural tonight I am happy I don't have a fireplace and Christmas on the Kent farm has the potential of being really interesting. Can you imagine the anti Santa coming down the chimney only to run into a house full of super heroes and hunters.

pen37 December 14 2007, 07:34:35 UTC

LOL! Reminds me of the part of Robocop 2 where the criminals try to rob a donut shop, only to find that it's filled with police officers.

Clark in my fic is modeled so much more after Iconic!Clark. Who is much more mature. When I say that Smallville!Clark is not my superman, you can see why.