Fic: But Deliver Us From Evil (2/8)

[pen37]

Fic: But Deliver Us From Evil (2/8)
By: Pen37
Beta: clarksmuse 
Rating: PG-13
Fandoms: Smallville/Supernatural
Characters: Chloe, Sam, Dean, Jo
Pairing: Chloe/Dean, Sam/Jo
Disclaimer: Not Mine, Fun only. 
Summary:   While hunting Kelpie, things go very wrong for Sam, Dean and Chloe.

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8

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Comments

[anonymous]

I love seeing these posts from you daily. They're a little present I look forward to every day.

Glad to see Chloe's okay and Sam seems like he'll pull through. It's Chlean fanfic, so I'm assuming Dean's going to pull through again, but I'm sure you'll put us through the wringer on the journey back to his health.

I know that Chloe heals in your 'verse, but I can't remember if she can heal others like she did to Lois on the show. Interesting little comment at the end from Chloe, too. Hmm, wonder what you have in store with all of these flashbacks.

Can't wait until tomorrow for the next part!

Sandy

[pen37]

Glad you like the daily updates. I'm trying to keep up with that for the time being. I write my fic two-three weeks in advance. But we'll see how well I can keep up this pace ;)

Myself, I like being able to count on regular updates when I get into a story.

I don't know where smallville is going with Chloe's powers, but in my 'verse, it's strait healing. She dosen't heal others with tears, or die/come back from the dead as a result the way that the show made it seem in the finalie. And it's a very subtle/in the background thing for her. Not agressive, like Wolverine in X-men.

And as you can see by this story, she can die, and came pretty close to it already.

What's happening with Chloe, Dean and Sam? Hmmm . . .

[fonapola]

Dun dun...

Oh the evilness of cliff hangers. Sam and Dean should hunt those little things down :)

Just an FYI, the prayer must be in black, because it doesn't show up on your page unless it is highlighted.

You have me hooked! Looking forward to more.

[pen37]

I'll have to fix that :P
Thanks!

[connbee]

That was great. Im really enjoying the format these parts are in, For me it adds to the tension knowing that something going to go very wrong soon. Looking forward to the next part.

[pen37]

Things are going wrong right and left. I had a ball writing this fic, and hearing the collective screams of anguish from my F-list as each cliffie drops.

*whispers* I promise, I'm not going to become addicted to cliffies. this was mostly an experiment.

[nelliewu]

i got caught up on the entire series yesterday. i love your characterizations of Chloe, Dean, and Sam. and the interactions between the 3, plus others who show up along the way, is great.

wonder what Chloe's last comment means? can't wait for part 3 to find out...hopefully :)

[pen37]

LOL! YOu'll have to wait and see ;)

[sixpacschic]

Loved this. Can't wait for more.

[pen37]

Very soon! ;)