Fic: But Deliver Us From Evil (2/8)

[pen37]

Fic: But Deliver Us From Evil (2/8)
By: Pen37
Beta: clarksmuse 
Rating: PG-13
Fandoms: Smallville/Supernatural
Characters: Chloe, Sam, Dean, Jo
Pairing: Chloe/Dean, Sam/Jo
Disclaimer: Not Mine, Fun only. 
Summary:   While hunting Kelpie, things go very wrong for Sam, Dean and Chloe.

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8

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Comments

[pipersmum]

Loved it but what does she mean when she said 'I wasn't the one that was supposed to die' I will have to read chapter 3 and find out. I liked the Doctors wife being called Martha too like Chloe said a good strong name.

[pen37]

YOu'll just have to read the rest of the story to find out.

[blackheart_me]

Something in the last entry about her sleeping like that worries me. I kno she had a rational explanation for it but still wouldn't her meta power wake her earlier? What if something affected it? Ahh so Sam is inquisitive and prods but I like that and I also like that Chloe doesn't hold back and that although she doesn't tell him full on, she does tell him the specifics to his question. I like how ur developing the Chloe/Sam relation. Whence before Sam didn't fully trust her now they're working together and doing a mighty fine job ;] how exactly do u put adrenaline to a body? (u mean the shocking things they use to revive a person?) Also I love how ur switching back and forth to the incident and to the events that Led to it. Dude Dean is in a coma?...again? Well this is cryptic: She looked blankly at Martha. “I wasn't the one who was supposed to die.”

[pen37]

Yep. Nice and cryptic. Keep reading ;)

[dhfreak]

Wow.. this is intense.. what happen... lol..

Hahahaha Chloe and Sam are going to act as if they are marry lol.

[pen37]

keep reading :)

[ovariesofsteel]

I'm so glad I don't have to wait for updates b/c this is too fabulous to be denied a click to go on for more.

[pen37]

Glad you like.