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Songfic: She's not the real me (SPN/Ros XO, Drifter)

Feb 26, 2009 22:20

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butter_cup27 February 26 2009, 22:54:38 UTC

This so dark and angsty.... I love it! I like that it's set in the pulse, it just fits and adds to the mood so well.

It was sweet how Dean and Sam were so patient with her when Lacey appeared and I loved that they took her to Bobby's house.

I'd be interested to read more of this, maybe going into Liz's other personalities that you talked about in your A/N, not necessarily a fic even a few more drabble sequels would be great (hint hint :P)

Anyway as I said before. Loved it! <3

pempees February 26 2009, 23:03:26 UTC

Thanks honey. You always manage to make my day *hugs*

You think it came too quick that boys took Liz with them? *unsure*

I kind of just wrote three more names as the other personalities, since wikipedia said there is usually four. Though, I may stick with just the one, but you never know what my sleepless nights brings with them.

To be honest, I would be interested to write more about this. As I said I have tons of details, and I just want to tell them *laughs*

butter_cup27 February 27 2009, 17:18:05 UTC

*HUGS* Aaaah thanks sweetie <3

I don't think it came too quick that the boys took Liz with them, I mean it's a one parter (well so far!) and you can't write every single thing, as a reader I assumed that there were things that happened between them at the beginning that we just didn't see (well, read!) but if you are worried about it then what you could do if you write another drabble or part is include more about it using a flashback or something. Not that I think you need too because in my opinion it came across fine.

Well, I hope sleepless nights brings more awesome ideas!LOL.

pempees February 27 2009, 17:34:35 UTC

You got it wrong again - thanks to you <3

Yeah, obviously things happened - it's not like they kidnapped her (which would be interesting by the way xD). I was just unsure that did I left the right things out. I'm gonna tell you secred: I actually didn't have the storyline really created before I started. So I wrote and then afterwards I started to think sould I have spent more time thinking :D

Sleep would be great sometimes too LOL

sara1722 February 27 2009, 11:32:10 UTC

I enjoyed this so much. It's dark, angsty, and the whole plot/storyline with the personality disorder is something I've never read about before. You made it work, with Liz having the disorder and it was totally believable.

Well done! :)

pempees February 27 2009, 17:30:51 UTC

Oh, thanks you so much *blush* I'm really glad that you liked it. It means a lot to me that you do ^^

regan84 March 23 2009, 03:54:56 UTC

I really enjoyed this story, its so different from others. While it was angsty it still had a hope about it, a tender devotion. The was Dean and Sam never gave up on her. More how Dean NEVER gave up on her. The way he would hold her down and ground her till Liz was back. Really a great story.

~~Lauren~~

pempees March 23 2009, 07:15:49 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this. This is the story which I personally like, and it's important to me that other people like it too. Yeah, I wanted it to be like that - show how someone Dean doesn't really know can become just as important as Sam. :)

Thank you very much for reading and commenting <3

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