11 part iv

Dec 14, 2009 22:32



IV )

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 04:35:37 UTC
:O

WOW
You're fast!!!
me still haven't update to others yet...
hahahahaha

WUAH! thank you so much!!!
*shares candy for being first*

yeah! that was jin in his dream!
*daddy Jin appears*
but haya thought it was himself singing.
and the four familiar figures, TTUN, are his uncles, cheering for him.
And kazu was being shy to him.
when it fact, it's all his dad....

i'm glad this chappie didn't confuse you.
:D

yayyy!!!

thank you so much for reading!!!!
hope to do my best on the next chappies

*gives cupcakes*

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:31:25 UTC
hahaha. nice timing!!!!
:D

*blush*
I'm glad you like this fic.
thank you so much!!!!!

i'm not sure on what will happen on chappie 12, but... hope to do my best on it.
:)

thank you!!!!!!!

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:32:57 UTC
yeah!!!
jin was soooo HOT HOT HOT during pinky!!!!

pinky was kazu's flash backs.

care was haya's dream, which he doesn't know already happened, and thought that it was him, when it really was JIN.

i want to make it twisted... and such...
:P

thank you for reading, chibi!!!!!
*chuu*

*gives cupcakes*

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akameonly December 15 2009, 05:14:23 UTC
Ohmygawd this was pure awesomeness oozing out mercilessly...

The atmosphere was so exciting at first..and then..I loved how u blurred the line from that excitememt to the reality of kames problems..a very swift shift that it just took me by subtle surprise...

Gawd....my heart aches for them

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:36:05 UTC
awesomeness oozing out?
*grins*
wuahhhh!!! * blush *

i discussed this with a friend, i wanted haya to... somewhat perform... and, when kame watch, it just... emotional, and scary for him, because... it's Jin all over again...
somewhat like that.
and the closest and easiest to connect,
is between MJ's THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL & Jin's PINKY.

i'm glad you liked it.
:)

thank you so much for reading this~
hope to do my best on the next chappies and on.

*gives cupcakes*

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watanabe_je December 15 2009, 05:22:11 UTC
Yey! for this chapter.....

Haya's performance is awesome... and Kazuya is a good liar (I'm sorry!!!)

But that dream... Jin...

Hope Hayato will visit Japan!!!

Can't wait for your next update (^____^)

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:38:27 UTC
yay you for liking it!!!
:P
me is glad you liked it!!!!!

:B yes, kazu is a good liar...
he doesn't have the guts to tell haya...

yah, the dream haya had, CARE... he thought he was singing it, when in fact it was Jin.
*his daddy~*
:P

hmmm, i'm not sure if haya will visit japan on the next chappie, but he is, soon.
and that's how it'll all rolls out.
:D

thank you so much for reading~
hope to do my best on the next chappies

*gives cupcakes*

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mae0513 December 15 2009, 05:34:19 UTC
love it~~~~~
THANK U!!!^_______^V

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:39:00 UTC
no, no...
thank YOU!!!!
:D

i'm glad you liked it.
hope to do my best on the next chappies

*gives cupcakes*

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