11 part iv

Dec 14, 2009 22:32



IV )

hayatoxkame

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deirdre_diuran December 15 2009, 06:19:50 UTC
I'm reading it on my laptop and not my cell this time so I can comment! lol

And to he point...
I love this! omg it's amazing, I'm hooked. Serously... so please update soon, nee~ ^_^

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:40:03 UTC
hahahaha...
wuah... then thank you for dropping by with the comments.

i'm glad you liked it!!!!
:D :P :B

thank you so much for reading.
and hope to do my best on the next chappies

*gives cupcakes*

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deirdre_diuran December 15 2009, 20:44:33 UTC
Yay! Cupcakes! *grabs, devours* thank you~ hehe and I'm sure they'll all be great! The story cab only get better from here

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shapika December 15 2009, 08:41:29 UTC
you update again. thats good news. Give you BIGGGGG teddy bear human size.
*easier to cuddle*
Hohohoho.
Nice nice..

Just hope for happy ending for Hayame.
jins gone. at least Hayato there to replace him. Poor Kame.

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:43:25 UTC
:D
TEDDY???
is it KAZU!teddy? Or RYO!teddy?
YAYYY!!!!
teddy is a teddy!!!! it's appriciated any form!!!!
*hugs*

wuah! really? glad you think it's nice.
:)

thank you so much for reading this~
hope to do my best on the next chappie

*gives cupcakes*

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ohryouchipi December 15 2009, 08:58:13 UTC
Lovely chapter, <3333333333333
i wonder what will Haya do when he find out, ehm... cant wait to read that, hehe...
Ganbare ne,
you update faster than previous chapter,
Love you,
wish you can update the next chapter very soon, hehe

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:46:45 UTC
:O yay!!!!
I'm glad you liked it
:)
>33333

what haya will do...?
hmmmmm, are you sure you want me to spoil them?
hahahahaha
:D

haiii... i updated this two days after the last chappie... for some reason, i just kept typing and typing.
:P
and i'm so glad i got positive replies... so far...
*is relieved*
:D

LOVE YOU TOOO!!!!!

hope to do my best on the next chappie~
thank you so much!!!!

*gives cupcakes*

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akeru_world69 December 15 2009, 09:44:50 UTC
wow... i loved the image of Jin (hayato) dancing Michael Jackson's song, that would be soooo goood,

thanks for another chapter!! in the next, he's going to Japan?? and he's going to find out about jin??
i'll be waiting for moore!!
chuu~

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:50:54 UTC
REALLY???!!!
WUAH!!!!
yayy!!!!!

yeah, because I think somehow... they connect.
i mean, the next generation of Michael, they said it's Ne-Yo, Usher, or Justin Timberlake.
but, if it's Japanese version, I think it's Jin.
:P
somewhat i think that way... hahahahaha

in another chappie... i may or may not write him go to japan. cuz the original plan is, after haya graduates, he asked for a vacation from kame, so he and his idiotic friends went all together, to australia, or something, but... they ditched aussie for japan... without their parents knowing...
then, that's when things will uncover themselves for haya.

not sure if this is going to happen in the next chappie though... hehehehe

thank you so much for reading~
hope to do my best on the next chappie!

*gives cupcakes*

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akeru_world69 December 15 2009, 15:19:20 UTC
i think so too. The way they move when dancing and the way they behave...

about the chappie... if you want my opinion, it seems better if they (the teens) change their destination without their parents knowing and go to japan, that would make the story more interesting, with suddenly changes and unexpected things, don't you think?
so for the next one... idk, haya can find something about jin, or hear kame saying something... and that's why he makes the other cahnge their trip...

you'll do great in the next!! don't worry!!
*takes cupcakes*
thanks!
chuu~

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 15:33:59 UTC
hahaha... that was my intention too...

hey!!! did you stalk me???!!!
:O
*le gasp*

hahahahaha

yeah, so, the plan was... Jay, Nick, Riley, and Haya took vacations together.
their plan was Aussie, but then, as they transit in Japan, waiting for their plane to aussie, jay and haya talked about their vacation together when they were little to japan... n then, they decided that why go to aussie when they can just ditch, and already in japan...
hahahaha

i dunno if this is how it's going to be, but i'm making them go to japan without kame knowing...

:D

*chuu chuu*

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keena_keena December 15 2009, 12:08:52 UTC
i sooooooooo loved the \mj part!!! it got me puzzled at first but i got it!!!!! waaaah~~so feaking awesome!!!!

ilovethis!!!!!

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peace_l0v3 December 15 2009, 14:53:24 UTC
makes me grin... hehehehe
i'm glad you got it...

the dance moves, somewhat similar... i don't remember if jin ever grabs his crotch during pinky, like MJ.
but both their moves r sexy, and erotic, no?
hahahahaha

pinky is kame's flashbacks
whereas CARE is haya's dream, on which he thought it was him standing there, when in truth it was his otou-san.

thank you so much for reading~
hope to do my best on the next chappie

*gives cupcakes*

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