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pdragon76

FIC: Of Mute Insensate Things, 1/1

Dec 30, 2007 12:53

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pdragon76 December 30 2007, 10:01:54 UTC

Thanks a bunch, rinkle. Glad you liked it, dude. One of the things muffaletta and I discussed was a non-supernatural threat, so you can blame her. It was pretty much part of the prompt. And an interesting thing to write, I gotta say...

brigid_tanner December 30 2007, 06:14:34 UTC

Nice work! Enjoyed the story a lot. Great tension that had me on the edge of my seat while reading. Poor Sam...he can't turn it off like Dean does. He'll be remembering and regretting this for a long time. I'm actually not sure Dean can flip that switch so easily...I think he just appears to be able to do it, while inside he's still angsting over what he's done.

pdragon76 December 30 2007, 10:05:47 UTC

I'm actually not sure Dean can flip that switch so easily

I absolutely agree. Add it to the ginormous list of things that turn Dean Winchester inside out while he makes it look easy... The boy is an angst!fest. No question or argument here. *points to Blind Spot, coughs into fist*

Thanks a bunch for reading. :-) Glad you liked it.

hellinabucket93 December 30 2007, 06:43:43 UTC

Wow,
This one was Intense. What an Awesome job. I love the conflict of the tension, between Sam needing to save Dean, yet understanding the overwhelming pain that the grieving father was in.
The flashback where Sam remembers how long Dean was performing CPR was heartbreaking. It shows how even though Dean was going to handle the situation by himself, it deeply hurt him emotionally as well.
You mixed a good emotional story in with a hardcore Dean whump.
I'm not sure why, but I love a story where Dean gets pushed to the edge emotionally or physically (If that makes sense). And this story has both.
Plus you have worried Sam, who has to drag Dean to safety.
Thanks for two great stories in one weekend.

pdragon76 December 30 2007, 10:09:11 UTC

Hey you. Thanks a bunch for reading.

God, you've certainly given your Dragons fic word count a nudge this weekend, m'dear. *giggles*

Muffaletta certainly gave me some interesting prompts to play with on this one, so I have to tip my hat there.

Hope you had a great Christmas, dude. *waves*

aussiemel1 December 30 2007, 08:17:23 UTC

How did you manage that gem in the middle of Blind Spot? How can your mind be in two places at once?

*is awed*

Great story. Action Sam was cool.

Another example of the guys really having no limits when it comes to protecting each other.

pdragon76 December 30 2007, 10:14:00 UTC

How can your mind be in two places at once?

Uuum, short answer to that? It can't. *chuckles* I totally put Blind Spot on hold this week to wrap this baby up. Truth be told, it's been a nice little reprieve, getting out of Dean's fucked up PTSD head for a few days. Chappy Nine was a bit emotionally brutal to write, so the break has been good.

But I'd be lying if I said I wasn't nervous about breaking my stride. I'm back into Chappy Ten tomorrow, so we'll see how easy it is to get back on the horse.

Thanks a bunch for reading. Glad you liked it. :-)

hanahap December 30 2007, 09:11:21 UTC

Hehe. Fuckknuckle.

Loved the whumpage - and I really liked the panic Sam felt at leaving Dean in that cabin when he knew he was pretty much defenceless.

pdragon76 December 30 2007, 10:16:36 UTC

My brother, JD, relentlessly refers to me as Fuckknuckle, in as public a forums as he can find.

I pretend to hate it.

*shrugs* Whattaya gonna do? We're bad at hugging.

Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it. \o/ for whump.