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Feb 28, 2006 17:49

Title: He Can't Know ( Read more... )

challenge 03, pairing: michael/lincoln, pairing: michael/lj, author: elissa, rating: r

Comments 19

thelana March 1 2006, 00:12:40 UTC

Oh, I think I know plenty of people who will love it ;D

But! Wouldn't a certain warning be in order? I realize that it spoilers the fun (though I kinda guessed it pretty quickly), but you know...

I'm putting it out here anyway because it wouldn't leave my head.

Bah, you always gotta listen to the head. Stuff always needs to be exorcised.

lissa_bear March 1 2006, 00:16:10 UTC

But! Wouldn't a certain warning be in order?

Yeah, probably. I just added LJ to the character list and added an incest warning. :)

thelana March 1 2006, 00:20:25 UTC

When he's inside of me, clawing at my back and moaning my name, I reach my peak and shudder in release

That's what they call -y these days....

Michael is not too smart though. LJ didn't even like Lincoln before the series started. And making Lincoln not-die will just make it harder for Michael to get to LJ. Michael truely is a special kind of masochist.

lissa_bear March 1 2006, 00:24:11 UTC

That's what they call -y these days....

haha! :P Fine, I'll remove the Y.

And making Lincoln not-die will just make it harder for Michael to get to LJ. Michael truely is a special kind of masochist.

I think that it was really more for Michael than it was for LJ...I don't think that Michael particularly wanted to play the father figure...

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clex_monkie89 March 1 2006, 00:20:04 UTC

You rock. And? I had to read it twice to notice the word "son" at the bottom.

lissa_bear March 1 2006, 00:21:56 UTC

*loves you*

clex_monkie89 March 1 2006, 00:25:59 UTC

It's true on both counts.

certainthings March 1 2006, 01:12:40 UTC

That's so sad and beautiful. Poor Lincoln. I... Waaah. :(

I'm glad you let it out for us to read.

"because I can't say know" you have a couple extra letters there.

lissa_bear March 1 2006, 13:29:48 UTC

because I can't say know" you have a couple extra letters there.

Heh, whoops! Thanks!!!

mooyoo March 1 2006, 06:42:57 UTC

Well I can't speak for anyone else, but I liked it. Loved the darkness and sadness of it, for both of them - Michael being locked in something he doesn't want and Lincoln not knowing that he's not the most important anymore.

lissa_bear March 1 2006, 13:29:59 UTC

Thank you

ferrynheit March 1 2006, 07:34:09 UTC

And as I read this, you can't know how much I love it. And as I post a comment in reply, you can't know how truly sad it all was. And as I read over what I've just typed, you can't know how utterly dorky I am.

That came from somewhere separate from the rest of me. I swear.

But seriously, awwww! So dark! Poor guys. All that angst. But it looks so hot on them. :)

Nicely done. I love secrecy. Oh, and sex is always nice. :D

lissa_bear March 1 2006, 13:30:37 UTC

You are lovely! Thank you! How was the time with the boyfriend? Did you have fun?

ferrynheit March 1 2006, 18:33:41 UTC

Yes, fun was had by all! And after a night of drinking, there are mysterious stains on one of my shirts. Weird.

Thanks for asking. :) And hopefully I will have a few pictures, if they didn't get ruined going through the x-ray thingy at the airport. And if I don't look like a retarded hyena in all of them. Not that I've ever thought I looked like a retarded hyena, but there's a first time for everything!