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Feb 06, 2006 23:53

Title: Years
Author: liberateourtime
Challenge: Pictures
Summary: Nick is just learning to read, but he recognizes his father's picture in the paper.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 110

M-U-R-D-E-R-E-R. Murderer. )

pairing: gen, author: liberateourtime, rating: pg, challenge 01

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aspensnow February 7 2006, 05:22:41 UTC
Gah, that's just a painful image, a little boy running his fingers across the word Murderer. I've always thought Nick's background had a lot of potential for fic.

Loved this.

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certainthings February 7 2006, 05:31:53 UTC
and there's the angry frown on his face that he makes when he's really mad.

I really like that line, I can hear a young voice saying it.

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liberateourtime February 7 2006, 20:35:25 UTC
Ah, thanks. :D I wasn't sure how to capture Nick's age, but I guess I did it correctly.

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lissa_bear February 7 2006, 06:22:00 UTC
loved this!

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thelana February 7 2006, 09:50:50 UTC
*shivers*

Very chilling. Loved it.

(and yay! for Nick-fic)

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liberateourtime February 7 2006, 20:34:29 UTC
:D Thanks.

I am so enjoying how 'Nick-Fic' sounds. Maybe it should just be called Nic? LOL.

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thelana February 7 2006, 20:57:33 UTC
LOL, one day that would totally be a great name for a fic community (if enough people were actually writing him *grumble*).

So, what's up at the Nick/Veronica front?

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liberateourtime February 7 2006, 21:08:11 UTC
I have a feeling once Nick's "terrible secret" is revealed, people will be feeling the love. A lot, in fact, if it's an evil secret.

Still haven't got word on the table. I'm thinking of just posting the fics for the prompts anyway and only post them in Pb_fic, rather than fanfic100.

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halfshellvenus February 8 2006, 19:54:11 UTC
I had a little confusion at first trying to remember who Nick was (*cough*), because I didn't think of him as being a child.

But I loooooooved this, and the concept of this little boy sounding out such a horrible, unexpected word.

And that is when Nick realizes that Daddy will not be coming home.

Damn, that was good.

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