Incongruous

[aspensnow]

Title: Incongruous
Author: Aspen Snow
Challenge: Pictures
Summary: LJ has a picture of a man
Rating: PG
Word Count: 171
Author Notes: Takes place immediately after LJ's Mother is killed

Comments

[lissa_bear]

Wow!

It's like this man, with his cold formality and silenced bullets, walked out of a movie and into his life and LJ finds his intrusion so incongruous with his high school reality that he nearly erases the snapshot of calculated malevolence

Just...wow, no other words!

[aspensnow]

Thanks! Glad you liked my first attempt at LJ =)

[certainthings]

Oh, I like this.

red black blood that is spreading across white white tile

Beautiful.

[aspensnow]

Thank you so much!

[liberateourtime]

Oh man, I love the last sentence! You captured LJ's horror perfectly.

[aspensnow]

ohhhh thanks! I'm so glad my first attempt at LJ turned out fairly decent, even if it was only a light poke at his mind.

[thelana]

Another great one (wow, I'm loving this drabble community, so much great stuff). Love his initial urge to delete the picture. Love the end sentence and the whole concept of the end sentence. Great drabble :)

[aspensnow]

Thanks! And I am starting to really love this drabble community too...such a great idea =)

[zsuness]

ahh.. I LOVE this.. very well written.

It's like this man, with his cold formality and silenced bullets, walked out of a movie and into his life and LJ finds his intrusion so incongruous with his high school reality that he nearly erases the snapshot of calculated malevolence.
...
LJ has a picture saved in his cell phone of a man who shouldn't exist.

[aspensnow]

Thanks so much!