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#06, bandage

Oct 02, 2008 00:25

Title: theme #06, bandage
Author: paws_bells
Characters/pairings: Uchiha Itachi and Haruno Sakura
Genre: Romance/General
Word Count: 1963
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me.
Rating: K+ (Some content may not be suitable for young children)
Summary: AU. Like her, he bleeds as well.

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k+ rating, itasaku, naruto, fanfic, general, romance, paws_bells, #06 -bandage, 50_shinobi theme

Comments 4

zelha October 2 2008, 01:29:52 UTC

Read this at work, and I seemed to me that it could comply as a prequel for Pitter-Patter, haha. :'D

I love how easily you can trip your mind inside Itachi's, drawing all thoughts and feelings from him. I love it!

♥ Cookies!

paws_bells October 5 2008, 16:15:11 UTC

xDDDDD

I hoped it amused you at work! And now that you mentioned it, this does seem like a possible prequel to Pitter-patter. xDDDD

Glad you liked bandage!Itachi!! *huggles*

valesck October 2 2008, 22:38:13 UTC

You always did have impeccable timing. So far, my week has been rather.. horrid.

My motherboard farted on me (it's not working so I'm on my mother's laptop).

And now I'm sick with this tedious little cold that everyone on campus seems to have, as well as here at home.

I almost thought that everything today would be lousy. Then something amazing happened.

.. I had a croissant with cream cheese and grape jelly. That was like a reprieve in my day.

Oh and you updated too, that was nice. XD

Great job on the one shot, though it was only midway in the story that I realized this was AU in the sense that there were no "BLARGHNINJASATTACK!" kinda thing. I was probably a little too sick to see the AU warning. Hehe. Over all, it was a funny little scene with Sakura mothering/lecturing poor Itachi ( ... )

paws_bells October 5 2008, 16:20:56 UTC

I'm really glad 'bandage' made you feel a little better, augh, if my motherboard died on me I would have had a very bad week too. And I hope you get well soon too. It does seem that the flu bug is flying about making lots of rounds this month.

As for the ninja attack thingy, believe it or not, you are not the first to mentioned that! Lol. I think really need to write the word 'AU' bigger or something. Or all over the place. xDDD

As for that "You are bleeding!" sentence, now that you mentioned it, it does feel somewhat stilted. xD Do blame it on this writing quirk of mine!