#06, bandage

[paws_bells]

Title: theme #06, bandage
Author: paws_bells
Characters/pairings: Uchiha Itachi and Haruno Sakura
Genre: Romance/General
Word Count: 1963
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me.
Rating: K+ (Some content may not be suitable for young children)
Summary: AU. Like her, he bleeds as well.

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Comments

[valesck]

You always did have impeccable timing. So far, my week has been rather.. horrid.

My motherboard farted on me (it's not working so I'm on my mother's laptop).

And now I'm sick with this tedious little cold that everyone on campus seems to have, as well as here at home.

I almost thought that everything today would be lousy. Then something amazing happened.

.. I had a croissant with cream cheese and grape jelly. That was like a reprieve in my day.

Oh and you updated too, that was nice. XD

Great job on the one shot, though it was only midway in the story that I realized this was AU in the sense that there were no "BLARGHNINJASATTACK!" kinda thing. I was probably a little too sick to see the AU warning. Hehe. Over all, it was a funny little scene with Sakura mothering/lecturing poor Itachi.

My only complaint was that first line: "You are bleeding!"

For some odd, unexplained reason my mind is being weird and it keeps pawing at that line. Probably because on the spur of the moment, she'd be yelling out "You're bleeding!" rather then split it apart. It makes her sound kinda robotic for a second there.

.. But feel free to ignore me. It's probably just the cold talking 'cause I shouldn't be this picky.

Congrats on yet another awesome one shot, and keep up the good work!

[paws_bells]

I'm really glad 'bandage' made you feel a little better, augh, if my motherboard died on me I would have had a very bad week too. And I hope you get well soon too. It does seem that the flu bug is flying about making lots of rounds this month.

As for the ninja attack thingy, believe it or not, you are not the first to mentioned that! Lol. I think really need to write the word 'AU' bigger or something. Or all over the place. xDDD

As for that "You are bleeding!" sentence, now that you mentioned it, it does feel somewhat stilted. xD Do blame it on this writing quirk of mine!