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patiperra

Dogfight.

May 08, 2009 23:41

Title: Dogfight.
Prompt: Violence.
Rating/Word count: R / 442.
A/N: This is supposed to be my strongest story for my Creative Writing class, so I thought I should share. It's not that long, but it gets a little bit gruesome since it is a violent scene, so beware.

( Who wants to fight? )

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patiperra May 9 2009, 16:57:22 UTC

Nah, don't worry about it. I wasn't expecting criticism since this has already been looked at by my teacher. And the 'bigger' and 'smaller' dog thing? It was on purpose. You could say they're like character names XD

ext_128875 May 10 2009, 16:38:00 UTC

This is indeed ONE of your best pieces of creative writing so far. It is very well written! The Ending must be my favourite part, though I didn't get it was supposed to be funny until you told me so. There are many things that you can read out from this short piece of narrative, and that's the idea!

I must say that the fighting itself is also one of the highlights. Quite intense!

Write about the things you really like and HOW you really like to write them. The rest is doomed to fail, in my humble opinion.