Comments | paths_uncrossed: one foot in front of the other (Charlie Hume, PG)

flaky_artist in paths_uncrossed

one foot in front of the other (Charlie Hume, PG)

Nov 27, 2010 16:10

Title: one foot in front of the other
Fandom: LOST
Characters: Charlie Hume, Ben
Rating: PG
Word Count: 108
Summary: There's no place for strict lines here. (prompt - thanks, written for lost_in_108 , PWM verse)

( so many wars we fight )

character: ben linus, type: drabble, character: charlie hume, verse: playing with matches, fanfic: lost, character: desmond hume

Comments 7

magicamethyst80 November 30 2010, 00:30:37 UTC

Very nicely done, love the tone Ben takes with Charlie, also like the chilling idea that he is too much like his grandfather!

flaky_artist December 3 2010, 15:32:23 UTC

Thank you!

ozmissage November 30 2010, 16:59:07 UTC

I'm in constant awe of the way you structure your drabbles. You pack so much story into 108 words, this is beautifully done.

flaky_artist December 3 2010, 15:33:03 UTC

Thank you very much!

aboutbunnies December 2 2010, 04:23:27 UTC

This is unsettling and wonderful. Well done!

flaky_artist December 3 2010, 15:33:47 UTC

Thanks!

borderlinetruth June 26 2011, 23:47:08 UTC

This is wonderful. I love this world of Charlie growing up on the Island.