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I Can't Hold My Peace Forever (You Would Regret It If I Did) - Jack/Liz

Jun 03, 2011 20:56

Title: I Can't Hold My Peace Forever (You Would Regret It If I Did)
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Spoilers: 4.22 "I Do Do"
Prompt: ham_napkin speak now
Rating: PG
Author’s Note: A little late submission for Round 7
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“What is it, Lemon?” Jack asked as he straightened his bow tie in the mirror.

Liz’s head snapped up and her eyes met his in the ( Read more... )

ham_napkin, fic, jack/liz, 30 rock

Comments 10

stamatina_rae June 5 2011, 03:54:05 UTC

"Stop,” she lightly pushed against his chest. “You’re being too handsome.”
Ha, Love it! I liked this very much. And I really wish this would have happened on the show!

parisgal3 June 6 2011, 16:41:14 UTC

I often say that outloud to myself about Alec.

Glad you liked :)

foreverislong June 5 2011, 15:45:40 UTC

Haha this was cute! I loved it, well done :)

parisgal3 June 6 2011, 16:46:58 UTC

Thanks :)

keenrevel June 6 2011, 01:37:43 UTC

This is awesome!! :) Just the thing I needed to keep my mind off my exams.

parisgal3 June 6 2011, 16:47:34 UTC

Always happy to encourage procrastination!

mindymakru June 6 2011, 06:05:56 UTC

Things that made me happy in this:

1/ Liz giving Jack another sudden "Don't marry her" speech cos the first one was so wonderfully honest and I really do wish she'd said the same about Awful Avery.

2/ Jack immediately calling off the wedding with the smallest hint from Liz of her feelings

3/ Avery knowing that it was cos of Liz and not fighting him cos there's just no way that she has a case against their awesomeness

4/ The inclusion of Gretchen (yay!)

5/ Jack being all desirey with her as soon as he's gotten rid of the other woman in white whatever her name was and got the real woman he loves alone

6/...the last lines were good finish too :)

parisgal3 June 6 2011, 16:49:29 UTC

Very happy to have made you happy :)

After I wrote it, I wondered if I moved them too quickly, but then I thought "hey, it's my world and I can make them do whatever I want!". Take that, reality!

mindymakru June 7 2011, 01:24:10 UTC

Nah, dude, I think it was plenty realistic that they'd wanna jump each other ASAP. Nice job! :)

md123 August 17 2011, 17:47:40 UTC

I liked this a lot. I died a bit at:

"Jack. Just so you know, going out and standing beside you while you marry her is me doing anything for you,”

I can totally see Liz forcing those words out.