[long drabble] Sea

Jun 23, 2010 14:54

title. Sea
author. junbeep
pairing. Soohyun/Kiseop
rating. pg
word count. 459
notes. It's been a while, I know. ;A; I haven't had any inspiration so it was hard to write. This is supposed to make up for the last Soohyun/Kiseop being so not!happy, but I apologize if it's crappy and you hate it.

Soohyun drifted off to sleep and Kiseop idly flicked sand particles off their towel piece by piece, one hand resting under his chin. )

pairing: kiseop/soohyun, rating: pg, group: u-kiss

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anapp June 23 2010, 23:38:50 UTC
Omg, this was so sweet. I could actually picture both of them acting like that. :) It makes me miss summer so much~ (it's winter where I live).
Thanks for sharing bb! I love when writers are able to make me like a pairing that isn't one of my favorites. :D

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sunghyeon June 24 2010, 00:54:41 UTC
Thank you for reading~
I'm glad I could do that! SooSeop is cute~

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katiewenchh June 24 2010, 06:49:59 UTC
this was just the right amount of sweet. romantic, but in a quiet way.

i've been craving sooseop lately and this was just perfect♥

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sunghyeon June 24 2010, 07:03:33 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!

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*beachy sweet* animearumira01 June 24 2010, 07:54:43 UTC
..the other commenters are right..this is sweet, but in a more quiet way..

..i always think SOOSEOP is a mature kind of couple..and i like it, cause though they're quite mature, they can be sweet too, but not that too sweet,..

..i love the part where SOOHYUN kissed SEOPIE's forehead, it's as if he knows SEOPIE so well, that he already know what to do to make SEOPIE's anger fade away just like that...

..and yeah the ending was so cute and sweet at the same time, the way SEOPIE flicked sands (that part was cute)..and the way he can't refuse SOOHYUN, that he just gave in like that..

...i don't really like beach (i would always stay just by the shore), but reading this made me want the beach just a bit...

...and yeah just like the other fic i've read, this too was well written..

..i'll end it here..
~akap akap~ (hug hug)
.take care.
*peace out*

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Re: *beachy sweet* sunghyeon June 24 2010, 17:20:54 UTC
Thank you for reading~

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