Flashpoint drabble: Twenty years (Ed, Wordy, PG)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: Twenty Years
Word Count: 200.
Characters: Ed, Wordy.
Rating: PG.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: 4x05 - The Better Man (big spoilers here about this episode!)
Summary: You're a team. You're family. How the hell could he keep it a secret?
Written for: flashpoint_sru, prompt #22 Time.
Disclaimer: I don't own Flashpoint.

Comments

[equusentric]

That last line is a gut puncher. Well done!

[paranoid_woman]

Thanks, I really enjoyed writing this. Glad you liked it! :)

[halocentury]

I'm sad all over again. That last line impacted me too, perfect how you worded it. :)

[paranoid_woman]

I know, sorry that it made you sad! And thank you. :)

[shanachie_quill]

Wow. Just. Wow. Beautiful job, darlin'

[paranoid_woman]

Awww, thanks! The entire drabble was built so that I could write that last sentence. ;)

[shanachie_quill]

I've been there. It worked really well.

[lillyg]

I love the last line. Though Ed is losing it if he's talking to himself :p

[paranoid_woman]

Great! :D

Now you are tempting me to write mad!Ed. Mmmm. I have an idea about him losing control over his life. You're evil. *loves*

[paranoid_woman]

Just so you know... the Ed story is probably happening.

[lillyg]

Great! ^^ I'm always plot inspiring. Too bad I'm not plot inspired for me... :/

[darkseeradept]

Whaaaa D: -mad arm flail- This is such a wonderful piece!!! But that last line was like a shot to the heart.

Awesome! I can't wait to stop working and go post something. Sadly Bosses frown upon it when your writing drabbles on your Iphone in CTX. XD Silly bosses.

[paranoid_woman]

Hahaha, mard arm flail! Awesome!

I'm glad you liked it. ;)

I saw that you posted... more than one drabble! OMG, this is going to be such a great weekend! *goes off to read*

Silly bosses, indeed!