Title: Scars of the Heart (Ed, PG)

Jul 08, 2009 16:28

Title: Scars of the Heart
Word Count: 200.
Character: Ed, mention of Dr. Luria and Sophie.
Rating: PG.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: 1x01 - Scorpio.
Summary: Dr. Luria's words were always in his head.
Written for: flashpoint_sru, weekend prompt: scars.
Disclaimer: I don't own Flashpoint.
Beta: The awesome lillyg, but I changed a few things here before posting so all ( Read more... )

flashpoint fic, genre: gen, flashpoint_sru, character: ed lane, flashpoint drabble

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shanachie_quill July 8 2009, 22:21:58 UTC
Ouch...but at the same time...ya gotta wonder if the people actually in these situations do think of these things. It's gotta weigh on their minds.

Nice job.

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paranoid_woman July 9 2009, 19:04:34 UTC
Yeah, I think it's hard for them to go and do something they're afraid is going to end up badly. I just wanted to explore that.

Thank you. :)

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shanachie_quill July 14 2009, 18:49:16 UTC
You did an awesome job exploring it. Welcome.

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lillyg July 9 2009, 00:48:46 UTC
Not a job easy to handle... Like I said once... The Ghosts...

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paranoid_woman July 9 2009, 19:05:08 UTC
Definitely not easy. The ghosts are always there. *nods*

Thanks!

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eviltwin July 12 2009, 21:43:58 UTC
A wonderful look at just what they must go through - not just Ed, I think, but all of them. We just see it more with Ed, that's for sure. He does seem to show it more, in my opinion. Him and Greg both. The mention of Sophie just makes it easier to relate to, for anyone who's ever loved or cared that much for someone else. Helps you realise just how many people are affected by each decision that Ed might have to make.

Poor guy. :(

Love it. x

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paranoid_woman July 13 2009, 17:47:29 UTC
I agree that his can apply to every Flashpoint character, even if the character that seems to get more story lines related to this is Ed. And yes, Greg has a lot of it too.

Poor guy(s).

Thanks!

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