Numb3rs Fic: Define Me, 1/3 (Don/?, Charlie, NC-17 - SLASH)

[paranoid_woman]

Title: Define Me, 1/3
Characters/Pairings: Don/?, Charlie (SLASH)
Word Count: 1,245.
Rating: NC-17.
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: All seasons.
Summary: One brother can define the other one's life.
Disclaimer: I don't own Numb3rs.
Betas: The awesome lillyg and the fantastic twins_m0m.

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[paranoid_woman]

It's been like a month since I posted for the N3 fandom for the last time! Wow.

Editing this fic was pure hell. I really like the original idea, which is kind of there. That's why the fic's published and why I've been fighting with this story for like 2 months now. I'm not even going to start talking about my love-hate relationship with it or all the things I had to fix. It'd be an ENDLESS rant! :P

But here it is, so enjoy. HUGE THANKS to lillyg, who read everything a thousand times, spent hours helping me fix this fic and told me not to give it up like a thousand times. She did so much. I'm eternally grateful for that. She truly rocks!

Also thanks so much to twins_m0m, who's an excellent beta, as always!

And now I'm going to bed. I'm sleepy... Love you all.

- PW.

[anonymous]

I don't know. Charlie outdoing Don at the FBI? I don't think so. Charlie is just one piece of the puzzle - Don is the one who puts it all together, and the one who takes all the chances. Don was already very successful at the FBI long before Charlie joined him. Also, a canon thing - Don did not join the Stockton Rangers at 18. He went to college on a baseball scholarship and was recruited to the Stockton Rangers from there. He has a college degree, because you have to have a college degree to join the FBI.

[paranoid_woman]

Okay, I respect your opinion. I do see some of things you said.

This was an experiment I couldn't let go, so I understand if you thought it was bad. It was one of the possibilities.

Thank you for the constructive criticism and the information. I'll keep them in mind.

[lillyg]

She never said he joined the Stockton Rangers at 18 if you read correctly. Neither that he didn't get a college degree... Now you can also sign-in to let a comment...

[kathgrr]

oh, that's good.. so glad to see you back with an awesome numb3rs fic! I love this one what an amazing twist, you really got into Don's head!

[paranoid_woman]

Thank you! It took me a long time to finish this series (even with the help of my fantastic betas and friends) so I'm glad you enjoyed it. *g*

[writing_racoon]

Yay! New Numb3rs fic!

Another great pairing, albeit one you don't see very often. I loved getting this insight in Don's character, both past and present.

Can't wait to see more of this fic!

[paranoid_woman]

Yep, new N3 fic. ;)

I'm glad you like this insight. It was a lot of work and it might not be perfect, but I'm really glad it's published.

Thank you for all your support!

[chymom]

You do a great Don/Ian story. I So so so hope you have more in line.

Are you going to do a flashpoint and Numb3rs cross over? It might be intersting to see how the two teams well three teams interact. {just wondering out loud.}

[paranoid_woman]

Thank you for reading, hon... Yeah, there are 2 more parts.

I'm not really a fan of crossover - I've only read a few short stories - but I admit that it'd be nice to see them interact. *nods*

[lillyg]

Do that and I sue you!

[paranoid_woman]

*falls off chair laughing*