S/L "Letters"

[parallax_prose]

Look what I did again instead of reading for class...

Title: "Letters"
Pairing: Sirius/Remus, with a bit of Sirius and Regulus (non romantic)
Rating: R
Summary: Sirius' last summer with his family ends in a discovery. Written for the elemental prompt fire: Passion, youth, catharsis

Comments

[fantasysci5]

I love stories about Sirius' family finding out, etc. And that Reg was sorry. For some odd reason that I'm a masochist, I've always wanted to read a fan fiction where Remus is called out for being a werewolf by someone, and then has to be expelled from school, angst, angst angst. Your fan fic reminded me of that. I think it'd be a great AU...

Anyway, good job.

[parallax_prose]

Thank you! :3 I'm glad you liked it!

Regulus has always interested me. He seems like such a complex character from the little JKR gives us about him in the books.

The idea of Remus getting kicked out makes me really sad, but it would make a good AU for sure. Poor Remus!

[fantasysci5]

Feeling creative enough to write it? :P I would totally love you forever...;)

[parallax_prose]

Haha, maybe when I get caught up on my homework I'll give it a try. XD I've never tried AU before though, to be honest.

[the_realduck]

loved. in every possible way.

[parallax_prose]

Yay! :D I'm glad. Thanks for reading!

[parallax_prose]

Yay, thanks for reading! :3

[ajf41]

This is amazing! Iloveit! But it makes me hardcore wonder why the Blacks didn't tell and get Moonykins expelled...

[ajf41]

And I lovelovelove your icon. I've been waiting to see one for Dark Knight forever, because what is more perfect than that line for anything relating to Sirius Black?

[parallax_prose]

I know, I love it! :3 It was made by runing_far_away

[parallax_prose]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! ♥

Yeah, I thought about that when I finished. I guess because Dumbledore would just deny it, especially since the Blacks are kind of sketchy anyways. ;)

[ballyharnon]

I read this the other day but I got distracted and forgot to comment... I'm completely loving this series; each element so far is perfectly represented without having to be literally present.

Your treatment of Sirius' father was interesting to me--since no one knows anything about him, he tends to be not-even-present, and that even effects how I see Sirius, but this is completely fascinating. That he should come to the right conclusion but play dumb and give Sirius the chance to tell him or to deny it is... gut-wrenchingly manipulative. And that he gets it but Walburga doesn't at first, and then when she does get it she turns instantly to violence... It's a reversal of what you would expect their roles to be, and it really highlights how strange things are in the Black household.

Also I love Regulus being hungry-for-approval and apologetic when he goes too far with it. The Black family are all dogs, aren't they?

Very well done! You win the internet today.

[parallax_prose]

Thank you! :D I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I'm starting the story for "air" tonight, and it's proving to be a bit more challenging (especially because I'm focusing more on Remus which is completely new for me. Sirius is a lot easier for me to write XD) Thanks for your encouragement! ♥

I'm glad Orion worked for you. I just figured that because Walburga is so over-the-top with her cruelty and temper, Orion had to be somewhat of a foil for her, but not in any way less nasty. The Blacks are just so interesting to me. Regulus was really fun to write, too! And yeah, they all are dogs indeed. ;)

Thanks so much for reading, I'm really glad you liked it! :3