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Grand Prix

Sep 13, 2008 16:13

Pairing: Eric Murphy/Vincent Chase [Entourage]
Date Written: August 31-September 13, 2008
Notes: For un_love_you prompt #17: Wish I didn't love you.

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eric/vince, entourage, slash, vincent chase, eric murphy

Comments 18

sthlmsyndrom September 13 2008, 22:09:46 UTC

Oh, poor E(and vince)! I loved this, E being so confused, and Vince all broken up about E not remembering!

"Yeah," Eric says shakily, as he pushes Vince's hand away, because he does. He may be Vince's guy, but Vince doesn't belong to anyone; he's not built like that. "I know, Vin, I know."
I loved that sentence, it made me want to cuddle E, and hit Vince in the head with a frying pan at the same time! :D

ebcdic September 20 2008, 02:46:49 UTC

thanks!

i think that sentence kind of sums up their whole relationship.

caorthann September 13 2008, 23:16:47 UTC

The pathos of this makes me ache in all the right places! Very moving. You just want to give them a hug and say everything will be ok.
Excellent writing!

ebcdic September 20 2008, 02:47:16 UTC

thank you so much! sometimes, there isn't a happy ending to be found.

burntcopper September 14 2008, 00:08:27 UTC

oh, E. :hugs, then wanders off to kick Vince in the head for being Vince:

ebcdic September 20 2008, 02:47:35 UTC

yeah. vince is... well, vince, for sure.

deepad September 14 2008, 07:56:02 UTC

Oh wow. You made Vince submissive in bed (which is canon the way the show shows him) and an asshole. Yay for in-character fic that makes me want to take E away from Vince and give him to Ari and Mrs Ari to take care of.

ebcdic September 20 2008, 02:48:23 UTC

well, thanks! the whole submissive thing has always been interesting to me. so i decided to kind of play it up, only with a twist.

deluweil September 14 2008, 09:14:19 UTC

stupid Vince..real stupid...

Poor E...

great piece :)

ebcdic September 20 2008, 02:48:48 UTC

yeah, e is really getting the short end of the stick there.

thanks!