Achilles Last Stand

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Pairing: Eric Murphy/Vince Chase [Entourage]
Date Written: August 5-9, 2008

Comments

[deepad]

Eeeeeee.
::wibbles::

::wibbles some more::

That was, I think, the first honest to God unhappy ending tragedy I've read in this fandom. I think I'm scarred. In a good way.

By which I mean to say that this is perfect backstory, and I love how ugly it can get because Vince really is that much of a fucktard, and oh my god Eric!

That was really wonderful. I hope you write more in this fandom!

[deepad]

D'oh. I just realised you wrote those other fics I loved. So, you know, keep writing! Angsty fucked up boy!sex!

I'd love to know how the rejected Eric of this fic interacts with Ari. And you were going to take on the phenomenal Mrs. Ari sometime, weren't you?

::waits patiently for you to write more:: ;)

[ebcdic]

that's okay! and i will!

me too! and yes! i'm trying to figure out a way to get around the lack of a first name.

:D

[ebcdic]

really?! well, you might see a few more of those from me. :)

thank you!

[crazy_thought]

i liked this a lot. that last line kills me!

[ebcdic]

thank you so much!

[deluweil]

*sniffles* poor Eric.. *smooches him*

you did a great job with this :)

[ebcdic]

i know, poor baby.

thanks! :)

[justabi]

GAH! KILLING ME! WITH LOVING THIS!!! I CAN'T TAKE IT I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

[ebcdic]

sorry!! but also thanks. :D

[ms_soma]

Wow!!! What a great fic. I could feel E's pent up frustration and humiliation - and the fact that Vince would use that emotion to get him in the scene seems to be typical Vince. It breaks my heart, but the raw realism just makes me go whoa and want more!

[ebcdic]

thank you! i just wanted to write something totally unrequited because sometimes it even seems that way on the show.