Round 2: Drabble Submissions

[regalish]

Please comment to this entry with your drabbles. And remember, there's no limitation as to how many you can post. Drabble submissions will remain open for the next two weeks, until January 10th

Comments

Viva Las Vegas, oh did you want a virgin cuba libre, PG

[urbancate]

He wakes up and everything is wrong. Squinting his eyes against unwelcome light, disoriented, he realizes that not only is he in a strange bed, he has not slept properly. He is sprawled on his stomach - uncouth, inelegant. And his head hurts. This is most disconcerting. He does not remember feeling ill, or any of the pre-symptomatic cursors to influenza, the common cold, or a general malaise

Re: Viva Las Vegas, oh did you want a virgin cuba libre, PG

[regalish]

Loved the bit about Sheldon thinking Penny's bra is Wonder Woman-ish. Spot-on Sheldon :D

Re: Viva Las Vegas, oh did you want a virgin cuba libre, PG

[urbancate]

Thank you! (First time ever writing Sheldon - he is such a challenge!)

Re: Viva Las Vegas, oh did you want a virgin cuba libre, PG

[regalish]

Yeah, he's definitely a challenge. But you had him pretty much perfect! The only spot I'd correct is just me being nit-picky because of the pre-med background, lol. The 'metacarpals' are actually bones of the hand. The 'phalanges' are the fingers. So it'd be his fourth phalanx.

Dance Dance, slow dance, PG

[menacherie]

Suddenly there is a hand in front of her face. She starts, and then finds her eyes traveling up the long fingers and the deep navy suit and into the bright blue eyes of Sheldon Cooper. Penny blinks then and tilts her head. “Yes?” She asks him then, a bit of a smirk on her face. She knows what he wants, but he has to ask for it.

“I have been informed that I should ask you to a dance.” He says, his teeth clenched together as if even asking her is causing him pain.

Penny smiles. “Yes, that is the non-optional social convention at weddings.” She pauses then. “Especially at your sister's wedding.” She smiles at him then, but doesn't take his hand, he hasn't really asked after all.

Sheldon stares at her. “Well?” He asks.

Penny quirks an eyebrow. “You've informed me that you should ask me to dance, but you haven't asked me really.” She smiles brightly when he glares at her

Re: Dance Dance, slow dance, PG

[regalish]

Awww, I loved this. I always wanted to do a fic about Sheldon's sister getting married, because it's an S/P goldmine. Loved that Sheldon had to take dance lessons whether he wanted to or not -- that sounds exactly like something Mary Cooper would force on her son :D

Great job!

The Great Favour, researching a role, PG

[veryberry_19]

The study light pouring into the blacked out hallway revealed Penny, turning as he open the door, as instigator of the frantic knocking that disturbed his study

Re: The Great Favour, researching a role, PG

[urbancate]

I &hearts this SO MUCH! Layers of Spock and Chapel and Sheldon and Penny! The dialogue here is delightful and hilarious and spot on.

Re: The Great Favour, researching a role, PG

[veryberry_19]

Hehe thank you ;)

Re: The Great Favour, researching a role, PG

[renisanz]

Aw. Sheldon is quite confident in his abilities, no? I liked how Sheldon was so insistent on not letting Penny inside. LOL.

Time Will Tell, blackout in the city/that's mine, PG/G

[veryberry_19]

In the darkness broken only by the small candle in his hand, Sheldon greeted her her with a polite smile. “Good morning, Penny,” he chirruped too brightly for 2.18am. “As you may have noticed we are in the midst of a blackout

Re: Time Will Tell, blackout in the city/that's mine, PG/G

[regalish]

Awwwww! I love the idea of this - Sheldon/Penny bonding over Doctor Who :D :D

Bernadette totally seems like a Whovian too -- good call on that one!