Lonely World

Mar 17, 2008 12:46


Might be part of a bigger series, might not ( Read more... )

special ops, mirage, bumblebee, jazz

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shafau March 17 2008, 07:01:47 UTC
Ohh, I do hope you turn this into a series - you're not the only one who's been hunting for Special Ops Team fic!

It's interesting to see that Mirage isn't the only one with frustrations about not being trusted due to his work - Jazz always seems to be the golden boy that everyone loves, so hearing about his little spat with Ironhide is rather good. And Bee saves the day once more, in his own particular way :) Great stuff!

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papyrus_quill March 17 2008, 09:20:19 UTC
Hope you do write some as well. It's no fun always being the one doing the writing, so I'd love to read your take on the three of them =D

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childofatlantis March 17 2008, 10:27:12 UTC
I like the edgier take on the Special Ops trio you've got going here, and I definitely like the idea that Jazz also has to face the kind of mistrust that Mirage does. And that Bumblebee has to sort the pair of them out. :) That little bit about the prolonged death sentence was chilling and sad at the same time.

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papyrus_quill March 18 2008, 16:01:33 UTC
It is sad in a way, all because they simply know too much.

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greenangel March 17 2008, 10:28:37 UTC
Lovely! Very fitting, very nice 8D

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__wilderness__ March 17 2008, 10:38:36 UTC
That's a perfect look into Special Ops!

Wonderful!

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wyntir_rose March 17 2008, 11:27:39 UTC
Ooooh! Nice! This was a perfect little look into the lives of our Special Ops Trio! I really liked this!

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