Comments | papyrus_quill: Lonely World

papyrus_quill

Lonely World

Mar 17, 2008 12:46

Might be part of a bigger series, might not ( Read more... )

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mmouse15 March 17 2008, 14:44:52 UTC

Wow, Jo, that's great. I really like that Jazz can empathize with Mirage, and that they deal with the same crap from everyone, and that they have each other's backs.
I'm glad this bunny bit you...

cmdrtekk March 17 2008, 14:55:44 UTC

A well written short story. A good look at the special ops team. It was good to find one. A series would be nice.

anonymous March 17 2008, 19:18:55 UTC

Bizarre that for all his "jazziness", we forget that Jazz still has the downsides of being Special Ops to live through, as well Mirage and Bumblebee. Good reminder.

*puppy eyes* More? Please?

lonegamer7

papyrus_quill March 18 2008, 16:01:58 UTC

working on it!

okamichan March 18 2008, 00:10:51 UTC

I agree that there are not enough Special Ops fics(if any). Thank you for this edgier look into their world.

eerian_sadow March 18 2008, 04:00:13 UTC

darling, this is lovely! i would love to see this become part of a larger series; you have the dynamics of this little group down so well.

also, since i'm so in love with your fic, may i friend you?

papyrus_quill March 18 2008, 16:02:50 UTC

there's a second fic in the works right now...

and yes you may! =D

eerian_sadow March 19 2008, 03:44:23 UTC

rock and roll! i can't wait to see it!

and, yay!! :D