meeting poem

Jun 11, 2004 13:55

walking towards you like winter into spring. like a failed priest. walking towards you like a lion with a thorned paw ( Read more... )

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noblemae June 11 2004, 14:54:07 UTC
your words are heart-steadying

and wonderful.

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xixi June 11 2004, 16:48:11 UTC
everytime
you took
a step
i took
a breath.

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alexli June 13 2004, 10:40:18 UTC
i like your poetry

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ironchef8 June 13 2004, 20:07:43 UTC
That was, predictably, awesome.

"walking with all my secrets in straight jackets. wondering if its even going to matter."

I especially love that.

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subtexts August 11 2005, 12:45:57 UTC
walking towards you jealous of the light that has already reached you and is covering your body and brushing your hair.

goddamn beautiful.

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